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Evaluating Class Feedback
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Evalua'ng class feedback
This was the feedback from my first pitch, which could have been be=er but there was not enough detail. I then used the feedback to improve my pitch. Here is that feedback…
‘Your pitch needs some more detail on the reader profile to tell us more about the reader and why your magazine would be right for them, but the informa'on you gave was clear and understandable’
‘ The name of the magazine gives an idea of what the magazine is about, and the ‘weekly’ part of it lets the reader know when your magazine is published’
‘You need more detail explaining what your magazine has to offer’
‘The fonts and colour pale=es that you are considering using should be shown in your pitch’
Judging by the feedback I received, it appears that the class knew what my magazine was about, how much it costs, and when it is published, but the class wanted to know more about what type of audience will be reading my magazine, which I will include in my improved version of my pitch.