Essay Walk

What I noticed• Garbage in the hall• Flyers on wall• Clock is too bright• Toilet flushing• Giggles• Door closing• Lockers open• Whistling voice• Video cam recording• Art on the board• Silver fish in the fishtank• Lady on the floor • Lockors decorated• Stuff hanging out of lockers• Backpacks on floor• Chair holding open locker• Lunch tray on table• Lady standing in hall• girl saying she lost 2 teeth this year in the same

room• Keyboards are clicking• Someone isi reading• Garbage cans rustling

What I thought

• 8th graders chit-chatting

• “What should I notice?” being said

• Squeaky weels of a walker

• Mrs.Wiki walking down hall

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• Toilet flushing• Giggles• Door closing• Lockers open

• Whistling voice• Video cam recording• Art on the board• Silver fish in the

fishtank

• Lady on the floor • Lockors decorated• Stuff hanging out of

lockers

• Backpacks on floor• Chair holding open

locker• Lunch tray on table• Lady standing in hall•

• girl saying she lost 2 teeth this year in the same room

• Keyboards are clicking• Someone isi reading• Garbage cans rustling

• Mrs.Clark reccomending books

• Clapping sound• Projector humm

• Random birds on book shelves

• A dress hanging on the wall

• Janitor’s cart moving

• Promethian boards in corner

• All computers on• Door opening-closing• Beeping• Foot walking on carpet

sound• Mr.Joe talking