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1. proceddure in line 4 2. Classes skip 3, should be I, II, III, IV 3. Functian (sic) 4. Artificial lungs 5. The comma after ‘getting dressed’ is entirely unnecessary 6. “unsuitable for surger, General…” should be full stop not comma. 7. CABG, when talking about CPB. Should be spelled out as no other
reference too it. 8. Cannulas could also be ‘cannulae’ 9. ‘Heart and lung’ should be heart and lungs 10. No consistency in CPB step full stops! Step 1 and 6 have a full stop
afterwards, but 2-‐5 do not! These should all have full stops 11. Sepsls should be sepsis 12. No need for capital O in Post-‐Operative care