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English Summer 2 Week 3.notebook

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English Summer 2 week 3

Tuesday to Friday


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Talk to your family Can you remember what a complex sentence is?

What ingredients do they have?


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In a complex sentence there are two types of clause. (Clauses are separated by commas or a conjunction).

The main clause tells the main bit of information, and makes sense on its own.

The subordinate clause gives extra information, and does not make sense on its own!


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Read through the sentences on the next slide and see if you can

identify the main clause and the subordinate clause.


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Screaming wildly, she ran from the house.

Joe Root is from Yorkshire and he is a good batsman.

I love roast potatoes, although my mum prefers them mashed.


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Screaming wildly, she ran from the house.

Joe Root is from Yorkshire and he is a good batsman.

I love roast potatoes, although my mum prefers them mashed.

Main clause Sub clause conjunction


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Write a complex sentence about the picture.


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LO: To write with purposeTuesday 16th June 2020

Success criteria

I can use persuasive techniques

I can use imaginative description

I can present work neatly


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Here are the five persuasive techniques we investigated last week. We'll be using them again this week.• Rule of three• Alliteration• Personal pronoun• Rhetorical questions• Evidence


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Now you have created a poster to advertise your Greek island resort you need to make a promotional leaflet to further persuade people to visit.

It will need to be nice and bright, use a range of persuasive techniques and capture the reader's imagination.


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You will need to focus on up to five of he attractions your resort has which must include:• luxurious hotel• beautiful beach • restaurant serving delicious food• historical attraction museum or temple • theme park/ water park

For each of the attractions you must write a short paragraph using a persuasive technique. It will also need a picture too.

Remember you must only say good things about your resort!


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To you with your introduction,we have some fact sheets about Greece which have some information you might want to use your leaflets.

Have a read through and underline anything which you think is important and that you would like to include.


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Task: write an introduction about your resort. Remember to make it sound as fantastic and luxurious as possible.

Challenge: Use a complex sentence.


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WAGOLL

Situated in southern Europe, this mythical paradise

is one of the most popular destinations in the world with more than 28 million visitors each year. Why not join them for the holiday of a

lifetime? 99% of visitors to Greece say it is the best

holiday they have ever had! Come and make

memories to last a lifetime.


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Wednesday 17th & Thursday 18th June 2020

LO: To write with purpose

Success criteria

I can use persuasive techniques

I can use imaginative description

I can present work neatly


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• alliteration• rule of three• rhetorical question• evidence• personal pronoun

Read through the sentences on the next slide and work out which techniques they use.

Remind yourself of the persuasive techniques we have used so far..


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Want to relax on glorious, golden sands? Then Greece is the place for you.

Sample delicious, sensational, sumptuous food in one of the island's fantastic restaurants.

99% of our guests rate the Crete Crib hotel as outstanding or better.

With fun activities for all ages, you and your

family are certain to love our resort.


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Want to relax on glorious, golden sands? Then Greece is the place for you.

Sample delicious, sensational, sumptuous food in one of the island's fantastic restaurants.

99% of our guests rate the Crete Crib hotel as outstanding or better.

With fun activities for all ages, you and your

family are certain to love our resort.

• rhetorical question

• evidence

• personal pronoun

• alliteration &rule of three


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Remember, this week you are making a leaflet to promote your island resort. Now you have done the introduction we need to move on to the rest of the leaflet.


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You will need to focus on up to five of he attractions your resort has which must include:• luxurious hotel• beautiful beach • restaurant serving delicious food• historical attraction museum or temple • theme park/ water park

For each of the attractions you must write a short paragraph using a persuasive technique. It will also need a picture too.

Remember you must only say good things about your resort!


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Remember, to help us we have some fact sheets about Greece which have some information we might want to use in our leaflets. Have a read through and underline anything which you think is important and that you would like to include.


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Task: In your work books, write a persuasive paragraphs for each of the island's attractions. These might include; • luxurious hotel• beautiful beach • restaurant serving delicious food• historical attraction museum or temple • theme park/ water park

For each of the attractions you must write a

short paragraph using a persuasive technique.

Remember you must only say good things about

your resort!


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Now you have written your introduction and paragraphs about your resort you need to use your ARMS and COGS for editing to check though your work. Ensure your sentences are clear, make sense, use lots of descriptive and persuasive language and are punctuated correctly.

Next week you will be turning your draft into a fully finished leaflet.


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Friday 19th June 2020LO: To share understanding of a text

Success Criteria• I can read each question twice so I can understand what it is asking

• I can scan the text to find words to help answer a question.


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Scan the text to find these words:

• crowded

• money


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