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8/13/2019 Eng102BC Proofreading PeerReviewSummary
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Proofreading Marks
Annotated Bibliography Round-up
Peer Review Summary
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Applying Proofreading Marks
The Frenchmen laughed following our newlyhired Mechanics explanation. The night before,on our drive into paris, we had filled up the candyapple red, rented Camarowith gazelle. And,
now, in the cool morning air, the car wouldntstart because, intranslation, gazelle meansdiesel.. Frustrated that our weekend in Paris
would be cut to one after noon, I asked our blue
Dickie-clothed, chuckling mechanic for abathroom. He pointed one finger grubby towardsa red door and said in a thick French accent,Natalie will show you
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Annotated Bib Round-up
Whats the purpose of constructing anannotated bibliography?
To find, critique, and evaluate plausiblesources for YOUR end of semester researchproject
1 paragraph What is it about?
1 paragraph Is it a good source? EXPLAIN
1 paragraph Can you use in in YOURresearch? EXPLAIN
DO THIS FOR EACH SOURCE
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Annotated Bib Round-up
Whats the rule of thumb for paragraph lengthin academic writing?
7-10 sentences
These kinds of sentences lack specificity:
This article is useful.
This article is reliable... Because it was published????? smh
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Evaluating Sources
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Activity
Is the source reliable or unreliable?Why?
And this?????
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There is an entire PowerPoint Presentation thatgives you guiding questions to help determine
whether or not a source is reliable or credible.
The tools have been given to you; you have todecide to use them.
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Annotated Bib Round-up
Grammar issues...Verb tense shifts
Which tense should be used to write aboutliterature including studies?
PRESENT NOT PAST
Also awful...
The source uses a variety of people to show what
happiness is. That is how people are.
NEVER end a sentence with a Be verb or apreposition
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Annotated Bib Round-up
Citation issues...Essays in the Behrens text...
WRONG
Behrens, Lawrence and Leonard J. Rosen. Chapter
12/The Pursuit of Happiness. Writing andReading across the Curriculum. Boston, MA.:Pearson, 2013. 408-10. Print.
Just a singular essayOn OWL A work in an anthology, reference, or
collection
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/06/8/13/2019 Eng102BC Proofreading PeerReviewSummary
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Annotated Bib Round-up
Good job...General formatting
Citations for the most part
Mulligans
Wednesday
Will submit revision AND original
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Peer Review Summary
On peer review sheet, writeReviewed by: (insert your name)
Summary author: (peers name)
Exchange essays.
Read the essay and complete the peer reviewsheet.
Give both to author (your peer).
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Upcoming attractionsAppropriate language & streamliningwriting
Fragments & Run-ons
Summary final copy due Monday 2/24