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 Nama : Veneranda Venny Grishela

Kelas : E

 NIM : 102013383

OUTLINE FORM

Topic Sentences : lastic S!r"ery #or Teens

$% S!pportin" Idea 1 :

• The $merican Society o# lastic S!r"eons estimates that more than 330&000

adolescents '' most o# them #emale '' !nder(ent cosmetic proced!res in 200)

•  Nose *o+s

• ,reast a!"mentation

• Ear reshapin"

• -ipos!ction

,% S!pportin" Idea 2 :

• $merican teens (ant to !nder"o these proced!res

• They #ace tremendo!s press!re to +e attracti.e

• They/re constantly +om+arded (ith ima"es o# +ea!ti#!l men and (omen (ho are held

!p as the norm% S!pportin" Idea 3 :

• S!r"ery may not +e appropriate #or adolescents

• $lterin" the (ay yo! loo +e#ore yo!/re e.en done de.elopin" physically seems

almost ridic!lo!s

% S!pportin" Idea :

• lastic s!r"eons ar"!e

• osmetic proced!res aren/t *!st a+o!t impro.in" appearances

• Teens tae e.ery imper#ection 4real or percei.ed5 serio!sly& physical di##erences&

ho(e.er minor& can in#l!ence (hat they thin o# themsel.es and ho( they +eha.e

• osmetic s!r"ery si"ni#icantly chan"es teena"ers/ 6!ality o# li#e

E% S!pportin" Idea 7 :

• That teena"ers nat!rally +e"in to #eel +etter a+o!t their appearance as they pro"ress

• Some simply "et !sed to #eat!res that they once #o!nd +othersome #or others& those

#eat!res act!ally chan"e

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• $ teen ha.e a lon"'standin" and consistent desire to ha.e cosmetic s!r"ery

9% S!pportin" Idea :

• The desire m!st +e theirs alone

• S!r"ery sho!ld ne.er +e a response to press!re

oncl!din" Sentences :

lasti s!r"ery #or teena"ers especially in the ;S$ is !s!al% lasti s!r"ery is !sed to

mae the one<s per#ormance "ettin" +etter% So that they can #eel more con#idence (ith

(hat they ha.e%

=e#erence : ;lene V% lastic S!r"ery #or Teens% $.ai+le in :

http:>>articles%latimes%com>200?>*an>12>health>he'themd12& 18 No.em+er 2013%

SUMMARY

lastic s!r"ery is (ell'no(n especially amon" teena"ers in ;S$% =esearch that cond!cted

 +y $merican Society o# lastic S!r"ery sho(s that 330%000 teena"ers in ;S$ ha.e done

 plastic s!r"ery& neither #or nose& lip& +reasts& and so on% Their reasons are they are not

con#ident (ith their per#ormances% They (ant to loo #la(less% The plastic s!r"eons said that

teens (ho do the plastic s!r"ery are not only #or their appearance +!t also to increase their 

sel#'esteem% lastic s!r"ery can lead to other e##ect% The concl!sion is plastic s!r"ery #or 

teena"er in ;S$ is common%