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Rev. 5

SHOW BIBLE

[email protected]

918.853.1126

(DIS)HONORABLE

BY GINO DEMARCO

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INTRODUCTION

A talented Marine following in his father’s footsteps discovers a surprising Vietnam

legacy, sending him searching through family secrets for answers about his parents,

identity and the meaning of heroism; 20 years later a young CIA translator, hell-bent

on revenge after 9/11, discovers a connection to those Marines and begins a new

chapter of the same search. Logline

(Dis)Honorable is serial drama that examines the nature of heroism.

In a structure reminiscent of This is Us, this hard-edged,

intrigue-filled drama simultaneously follows multiple timelines,

each centering on a different generation of the Pyle family:

• the Vietnam war and early 1960s;

• the Iran Hostage crisis and other Middle East events in

1979-1983;

• post-9/11 Iraq/Afghanistan.

In the pilot we discover the primary characters and secrets in each era:

• a smart, competent young Marine whose dreams of

following in his war-hero father’s footsteps are

derailed when he discovers the truth about

Vietnam;

• a language prodigy at Columbia University who is

recruited into the CIA after 9/11 and uncovers ties

to a family he never knew existed;

• Two strong women, each a mother and wife, who

connect the family timelines, characters and

secrets.

(Dis)Honorable targets cable or streaming to allow

authentic military language and action sequences, with

natural breakpoints for five seasons of six episodes each.

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CHARACTERS – SEASON ONE AND TWO

Primary Characters

ELMER “JP” PYLE, JR. – A smart, driven young Marine

who is exactly what the post-Vietnam Marine Corps is

looking for in 1979. He does NOT fit the screw-up

reputation left by his father in Vietnam. JP (Junior

Pyle) is the primary focus of the first two seasons, which

track his life and Marine career through 1983, when his

son is born.

Besides being smart and competent (a rifle expert and martial arts black belt), he

learned Persian from his Iranian stepfather and spending summers in Tehran. These

skills become tremendously valuable when the Iran hostage crisis unfolds shortly

after JP finishes infantry training. He is tapped for a

special intelligence mission on the ground in Iran led

by his father’s Vietnam platoon commander and

nemesis, Ernie Rowan.

JP is not perfect: he has a temper/mean streak that

comes out in the pilot and will complicate matters on

the ground in Iran. His story is a personal coming of

age that mirrors the country’s forced maturity at the

beginning of the jihadist terror movement.

TRIP STEIN – College sophomore Trip is a language prodigy

on scholarship at Columbia University who’s compelled into

action when he loses his girlfriend in the terrorist attacks of

9/11. He tries to join the Marines but is quickly recruited

instead by the CIA, where his language skills make him first

an interpreter then operative in the Middle East. Adopted

young, Trip has no idea that his birth name—Elmer Pyle

III—ties him to a long and varied Marine Corps history.

Trip’s language skills showed

early: at Hebrew School, the Rabbi singled him out for a

special high school program jointly run by Yeshiva and

Columbia Universities.

Trip is second lead in the first two seasons and

becomes the primary protagonist in the three seasons

that follow.

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LOU-ANN PARKER/ANN MAHABADI – Lou-Ann was Pyle Sr.’s wife

and the only character who is central in all three timelines. She

transitions from Lou-Ann Parker to Lou-Ann Pyle when she marries

Pyle Sr, then to Ann Mahabadi when she remarries after Pyle Sr’s

death, drops the “Lou” and takes her new husband’s last name.

She is the keeper of family secrets and often the voice of thematic

perspective.

ERNIE ROWAN – Pyle Sr.’s platoon commander in

Vietnam, who witnessed his actions in combat and spreads the word

of his misdeeds. Rowan stays in the Corps and moves into

intelligence, where he leads an operation in Tehran after the hostages

are taken and comes across JP. Rowan becomes the primary

antagonist in the first season with JP on the ground in Iran and his

character arc over the season helps illuminate and investigate the

“nature of heroism” theme.

KAREN MIDDLEBROOK/PYLE/STEIN –The pilot

introduces Karen only as Trip’s mother, but viewers

know she must also be JP.’s ex-wife. By 2001 she has

remarried college professor Sid Stein and moved to

Westchester County, NY, about 25 miles from NYC.

The first two seasons follow Karen’s role in both

timelines, revealing how her character as Trip’s mother

can be so different from the girlfriend and wife of JP.

Other Important Characters

ELMER PYLE, SR. – Viewers experience the patriarch as mostly a static character

whose reputation is apparently more important than the man. The first season

reveals much of Pyle Sr’s story and establishes the

multiple points of situational irony it initiates. The

second season capitalizes on that irony and relates it to

the theme.

CHIP BOLEN – Bolen was in Vietnam with Pyle Sr and

provides the military connection with JP as the senior

enlisted man at Jr’s infantry training school in 1979.

Bolen is the revealer of secrets (the complement to Ann Mahabadi) who provides JP

with critical information related to the 1960s timeline. In later seasons, he serves a

similar role with Trip. He inhabits all three timelines like Ann but is a more

peripheral character.

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MARIA TREVINO – A college student whose relationship with Trip is

abruptly terminated when he goes undercover after CIA training at

Quantico. The parallel stories continue as Trip leaves far more

behind than an ex-girlfriend.

JOE MAHABADI – Ann’s second husband and JP’s stepfather, Joe

provides a critical plot link to 1980s Iran, where his parents still

reside. His character often illuminates thematic points through

conversations with Ann and JP.

EMILY PYLE – A young girl who grows up never knowing her father

or her family connection to the Pyles. She’s a central character

season three and secondary protagonist in seasons four and five.

DARIUS HAMID – JP’s karate instructor in Tehran who becomes important

(physically and thematically) once JP hits the ground in Iran.

JERRY WALKER – A CIA operative who participates in both the 60s and 80s timelines

in the first two seasons.

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THE CENTRAL PLOT QUESTIONS

The pilot launches several questions that form the series engine (and arc) for the first

three seasons:

• What really happened in Vietnam?

• Who was Billy and is he JP’s father? What did Lou-Ann’s airmail letter say?

• Will Rowan blame JP for the sins of his father?

• How could Trip not know his father and grandfather were Marines? What

happened to JP that Trip does not know who he is?

• What happened between Karen and Ann, and how could Karen go from Marine

wife to anti-military mother?

These questions provide a fantastic fabric of situational irony: as viewers become

aware of the answers, they completely recast entire plotlines in a new light. And

situational irony often becomes dramatic irony since viewers learn significant

information before the characters, highlighting the importance (or folly) of the

character’s course of action before it is taken.

The questions and irony don’t end with the pilot. The first season finale, for example,

introduces a plot twist in Trip’s timeline that forms the genesis of seasons four and

five: he impregnates a woman before leaving for the Middle East without knowing it.

Like her ancestors, Emily Pyle grows up on a parallel path of trying to find a father

she never knew while living under a legacy he created, and in doing so discovers her

own Pyle identity and personal meaning of heroism.

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A LANDSCAPE OF LAYERS: STORY, STRUCTURE AND TONE

(Dis)Honorable is a show where layers of story, structure and tone are intentionally

designed to convey richness and authenticity to the audience.

Story Layers

Series episodes feel rich and complex, offering

more story than appears on the surface.

Parallel narratives use events of one generation

to foreshadow or reveal those in another; layers

of situational irony are built on layers of secrets.

Example: JP dreams of being a Marine like his

father, but finds he’s been striving to follow in the footsteps of a screw up. Later he

finds his father was the opposite of the screw up legacy: a combat hero who sacrificed

his life to save another Marine, which in turn saved his entire platoon. But the entire

arc occurs against a backdrop of critical information JP doesn’t know: Pyle Sr may

not have been his father at all.

Structural Layers

(Dis)Honorable uses structure as story, interweaving multiple timelines to heighten

the plot’s intrigue and irony, thus making the show feel richer.

Each protagonist is pursuing their own life, but

viewers see parallel struggles despite the 20-year time

difference because the stories are told simultaneously.

Through unique circumstances, each father has no

relationship to his child but leaves behind a legacy

that impacts their entire life.

Example: JP’s character victory in the pilot comes

when he decides his Marine Corps identity is not

dependent upon his father’s shameful legacy. But other elements—the teaser, the

airmail letter, the “two guys” who witnessed Pyle Sr’s death—tell viewers that Pyle

Sr’s impact is far from over in JP’s story.

Tonal Layers

A unique tone for each timeline contributes authenticity to the historical period but

also illuminates that period’s social complexity.

The early 1960s, in historical context, seems simple and uncomplicated. 1979

through 1983 is more complex: the Vietnam legacy, massive social upheaval of the

late 60s and early 70s, and the economic desolation of the Carter years. By 2001

complexity is exponential: an always-connected world of email and cell phones, 24-

hour news cycles, and the personal and national realization that American’s security

was much more tenuous than believed.

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Example: The 1960s timeline tone should enhance the impression of history—a past

that cannot be changed by the current characters—and simplicity, like the original

Pyle. It could be black-and-white, washed out or a low-quality, film-reel look

mimicking early Vietnam war footage.

The tone for JP’s timeline should still feel slightly off for today’s viewers—slightly

washed or possibly just lit differently than Trip’s, with different costume and music.

Military scenes feel desert rather than jungle. There’s more of a contrast between

civilian and military than in the 60s.

The early 2000s tone is similar to today, but the devices and costumes are different.

Computers, flip phones and covert CIA operatives instead of military.

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PLOT NOTES – SEASONS ONE AND TWO

(Dis)Honorable is serial drama whose pilot lays the foundation for a complex tale with

intricate plotting. The notes below will allow writers to deliver on that promise while

building new stories for season three and beyond.

Season One – JP

• JP and nine other Marines are tapped for an intelligence mission on the ground in

Tehran to prepare for hostage rescue. Rowan, as mission leader, becomes aware

of JP and begins making trouble for him during training. JP’s instructors say he

is tailor-made for covert ops role and push Rowan

into accepting him.

• JP reads his father’s record book and finds the

cause of death was listed as a “grenade explosion at

extremely close range causing massive blast trauma

to the torso and vital organs.”

• JP trains for his Iran mission with CIA courses in

Persian, covert urban operations, Tehran geography and covert radio

transmission. JP meets Jerry Walker, senior CIA operative on Iran mission who

was also in Vietnam for Starlite (who was also in Rowan’s office in pilot). Walker

says he knew Pyle Sr., gives JP the name of the Navy Corpsman who was with

Rowan’s platoon in Nam, says he’s still alive. JP writes to Corpsman and asks

about his dad. Later episode, Corpsman writes back and says he will only meet in

person but JP leaves for Iran.

• Boyle talks to the two Vietnam witnesses from the silver star hearing. Flashbacks

reveal they did not see Pyle’s actual death but saw Carino’s actions that led to his

award of the Silver Star. They say the order of events was: Pyle dives toward

Carino, Rowan goes down from bullet, Carino charges and subdues machine gun

nest, Carino goes down from bullet.

• JP and the others are inserted into Tehran as independent operatives, each with

overlapping missions. JP goes to see Joe’s parents, asks to stay with them. They

are terrified of him being there and convince him he cannot stay. JP goes to see

Hamid (his Persian karate instructor), who after initial objections takes him in.

• Action scenes throughout episodes: JP

makes rounds through Tehran, reports

back; avoids detection; spots and avoids or

eliminates tail; observes students around

embassy. (Tie in if possible to Argo and On

Wings of Eagles story lines with JP as

covert operative?)

• JP is a forward observer for the helicopter

rescue mission but helos never arrive.

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Afterward, he reports in activity on ground

around the areas terrorists are held. He is

noticed by militants, who come after him. He

hides with Hamid and gets away but the

militants capture, torture and ultimately kill

Hamid for his ties to JP now and through the

years. Hamid does not give up JP, reinforcing

the show theme of heroism as sacrifice.

• Rowan continues as JP’s antagonist and Walker begins to suspect that Rowan’s

intentions for JP are dangerous.

• After leaving Hamid, JP is on the run without his primary radio. He has a backup

radio but does not know the frequencies. There are a series of pre-arranged meet-

up points for exfil but JP misses all of them but the last. He’s on the run for a

couple of months, outside of Tehran headed toward the Turkish border.

• Rowan investigates more about JP as the season proceeds in an apparent attempt

to make things worse for him. Multiple scenes show Rowan doing mysterious

investigations related to JP, including talking to Bolen.

• In the two months JP goes missing, he is suspected as dead. Rowan flies to

Oklahoma to notify JP’s parents that he’s missing, which is unusual—why would

he do that on a covert mission? When Ann answers the door, he says “Hello

Annie” and she says, “Billy?” They beat around the bush, viewers don’t see the

entire conversation and Rowan ultimately leaves mad. Afterward he flies to

Tehran, and Walker, who doesn’t know where he went and is worried he is

somehow after JP, also heads to Iran.

• Finale:

o JP goes to final exfil point, after which he will

have to try to make the Turkish border alone. At

exfil point, he meets Rowan—JP knows he hated

his father and is worried—but Rowan has come

to get him out.

o JP’s Iranian tail finally catches up with him, JP

and Rowan end up in fight with Iranians; they are successful but Rowan is

shot saving JP.

o They head for Turkish border in a vehicle, Rowan laying in the back. During

the ride, Rowan tells JP he knew his dad, blamed him for something that

wasn’t his fault. JP asks “Vietnam?” and Rowan says no, Vietnam was Pyle

Sr’s fault but Rowan put him on point that day when he shouldn’t have—he

always held a grudge against Pyle Sr because “Lou-Ann chose him.” Then

Rowan passes out.

o Walker catches up with JP/Rowan before Turkish border. Final scene, JP is

elsewhere, Rowan comes to, Walker asks Rowan if he told JP the truth about

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“his father,” Rowan dies before he answers (heroism = sacrifice; redemption by

Rowan saving JP’s life), but the fingers on Rowan’s right hand twitch.

Season One – Trip

• Trip gets very limited back story on JP from Vance:

o JP was in classified Marine Corps intelligence unit operating in the Middle East

in conjunction with the CIA.

o He was in Iran in 1980: advance cover team for the hostage rescue attempt.

Rescue turned out to be a disaster but JP was seen as golden boy after that for

his escape from Iran.

o Back in the early 80s, the Middle East was like the wild west; JP’s language

skills, swarthy looks and connections (both CIA and local) allowed him to travel

freely across the region. He was highly independent and had very little

supervision. He also had an

extremely good network of local

Iranian contacts that were never

documented.

o He was assigned to follow Kaveh

Bahar, one of the Iranian leaders

when hostages were taken and

later a critical source of terrorist

financing in the Middle East.

o He was in Lebanon in October

1983, three days before the Marine barracks bombing in Beirut.

o Only two people in the world were known by the CIA to have personal

connections to both Iran hostages and Beirut bombing: Kaveh Bahar and JP.

Both disappeared after the barracks bombing.

o Some people believe Bahar turned JP and they both received new looks,

identities after Beirut.

• Trip is accepted as an operative and during training in Camp Peary (Virginia), Trip

begins a relationship with Maria Trevino, a college student at American University.

But Trip maintains a cover, tells her his name is Elmer Pyle.

• Trip’s operative training parallel’s JP’s covert operations training: geography,

radio and signals, evasion and detection.

• During training, after flashback of pilot finale scene where silhouette is watching

Trip and Vance, silhouette is revealed to be Walker,

who is retired but used connections to have

conversation with Trip.

o He tells Trip he knows his father did not turn

but can’t prove it.

o It’s worse than Vance let on: some CIA

contractors reported there was a kill order on JP back

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in the day. It was a long time ago but if JP actually was found, he might be

killed.

o There are people still in CIA who will definitely hold it against Trip if it gets out

that he is JP’s son. Walker used connections to get birth name expunged from

his records but he should never use it.

o Trip looks through cell phone at Maria’s contact, says to

contact card, “I’m sorry, if I hadn’t tried to be clever with

you, maybe we could see each other again.” Since he

gave Elmer Pyle as cover name, he takes out the sim card

and throws it away, gets a new sim card—burns the bridge with Maria.

• Trip goes back to NY one weekend, ends up confronting Karen about JP. She’s

shocked that he knows anything about him, she had always told him he

disappeared and they divorced. She tells him the story:

o She and JP were fighting a lot because he was gone all the time, wouldn’t tell

her about work. She was pregnant with Trip and wanted him to quit Marines,

he wouldn’t, said it was important. What could be so important for a

translator?

o It all came to a head when he left a week before Trip was born. Marines said

he was officially missing but he never came back and she filed for divorce three

years later to marry Sid. Sid adopted Trip and they changed his name, she

didn’t want to think about JP or the Marines any more.

o She tells him about phone calls from Ann

Mahabadi. He’s surprised at the name, she

tells him about Ann’s remarriage to Joe.

• Finale:

o Trip, scheduled to leave soon for Afghanistan,

goes to see Ann and Joe in Oklahoma City.

Much older Ann looks out the door and has

immediate flash that it’s JP, calls for Joe, then realizes it can’t be. She opens

the door and says, “You must be Trip. God you look like your father.”

o They talk and Ann says she knows there are rumors that JP did something

wrong but she knows it can’t be true, especially given what happened with

Elmer Sr. Trip doesn’t know what she means, so she tells the story of Elmer

being responsible for getting his platoon killed. “JP spent his whole career in

the Marines trying to find out what really happened in Vietnam and trying to

make up for his father’s legacy. He would never bring shame to the Pyle

name.” Trip promises to let them know if he ever finds any more out about JP.

o As he’s leaving, Joe walks out with Trip and says there’s something Ann

doesn’t know: his parents in Iran told him a different story about JP that puts

everything in a different light.

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o At American University, Maria takes a self-pregnancy

test: positive. She’s shown calling Trip’s cell, disconnected.

She calls where he works (his cover organization) but

there’s no Elmer Pyle. The nurse at university infirmary

confirms she’s pregnant, asks if she wants the number for a good clinic, she

says she’s Catholic and “would never do that.”

Season Two – JP

• JP and Walker bury Rowan, make it out to Turkey. Walker tells him Rowan didn’t

actually see his dad die and had grudge against him—JP really needs to talk to

Corpsman, who knows entire story. Walker says he’s not sure why Rowan had it

in for Pyle Sr. JP says Rowan told him he had it out for Pyle Sr because “Lou-Ann

chose him.” So Walker knows Rowan didn’t tell JP that he might have been his

father.

• JP returns to US and goes into military intelligence. Action

scenes of him training, spending time on ground in middle

east, primarily supporting Iraq in the Iran/Iraq war.

• JP begins following Bahar in Iran and tracks him across the

middle east. Beginning 1982 he repeatedly tracks him into

Lebanon.

• JP looks over his father’s records again, suspects that his

father refused to marry Lou-Ann when she got pregnant.

• Much of JP’s story is his meeting, courting and marrying

Karen Middlebrook. She gets pregnant in January 1983, first month after

marriage. As pregnancy proceeds, she tells him she increasingly has a sense of

foreboding, he needs to get out of the Marines.

• Third to last show, JP confronts his mother before going off to Middle East:

o Tells her he met Rowan and Rowan said Pyle Sr was responsible for Vietnam

but Rowan had “put him in a bad spot,” also Rowan apologized about

something else, said he blamed Sr for something that wasn’t his fault—any

idea what it was?

o Asks why his dad wouldn’t marry her when she got pregnant, Ann asks how he

knew, thinking Rowan told him but he says he got

Sr’s records and it showed date of marriage (the page

she had torn out and thrown away in the pilot). She

said like Rowan, JP had it wrong—she was the one

to blame, she didn’t tell Sr about the pregnancy.

They can talk more about it when he returns. While

JP is not looking, she slips the airmail letter with

hearts into his gear.

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• Second to last show:

o JP finally meets with Corpsman at a restaurant and finds

out story about his dad, told in flashbacks: Pyle Sr was crawling

toward Carino when an enemy grenade lands next to Carino.

Wounded Carino can’t get away from it and Pyle Sr dives on it,

killing himself to save Carino. Carino goes into rage, charges

enemy, is killed but gives squad time to regroup, attack and

overcome. Sr didn’t kill nine, he saved the other 35 (heroism =

sacrifice). JP takes notes on the back of a flyer pulled down from the

restaurant bulletin board.

o Karen is pregnant, baby is coming soon. They argue about a name, he wants

Elmer III, she doesn’t. She accuses him of “loving the Corps more than your

wife,” he leaves mad.

• Finale:

o JP goes to Lebanon after Bahar is spotted there. He discovers there is an

imminent attack of multiple vehicles, goes undercover to stop it. As attack

launches, he takes out most of the vehicles and kills Bahar, but he is shot and

one truck makes it through, blows up the Marine barracks (the bombing

actually happened, 243 dead). Militants are shown collecting Bahar’s body.

o That same day (Oct. 23, 1983), Karen goes into labor, Trip is born.

o JP’s body is not found and he is officially listed as missing, not dead. Days

later Karen sees a Marine officer outside her room, knows something happened

to JP. She names the baby Elmer and tells him that’s as close to his dad as he

will ever get.

o A young boy find’s JP’s “go bag” in a trash heap.

He keeps it and later opens it, finds the airmail

letter with hearts and the flyer with notes.

Season Two– Trip

• Joe’s conversation with Trip:

o In the mid-80s, he went to Turkey to visit his parents, who still lived in Iran.

He had a feeling he was being followed.

o His parents told him the story of Darius Hamid (JP’s karate instructor in

Tehran), who the Iranians say was a traitor but by now the parents know the

real story about how he died for hiding JP.

o They told him “a man who was a friend of Hamid had given them JP’s “old

karate gi that JP left the last time he went to Hamid’s dojo.” Joe realizes it’s

code: they have something that belongs to JP that might be dangerous.

Worried that he’s being watched, he tells them to hold onto it and he’ll get it

later. His parents told him they would put it in “the hiding place.”

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o During the meeting, a man watches and is listening to their conversation.

o Joe believes he has been under surveillance since that meeting. He hears

clicking on the phone, he gets mail that took a week to get delivered from short

distance away, his office at the University has definitely been searched.

o He’s never told Ann about any of this because

he’s never been 100% sure.

o Joe’s parents have since died but he knows

where “the hiding place” was.

• Trip goes to Afghanistan and works with others

there on the ground to improve his skills. He works

as a “spotter” around mosques, trying to identify

known Taliban targets.

• Trip takes intensive martial arts training with a CIA

specialist early in, and is seen practicing throughout, the season.

• Maria has the baby, names her Emily Pyle, lists Elmer Pyle as the father.

• Trip gets the news he’s going into Iraq as part of an advance team. He’s shown in

intensive Arabic and Kurdish classes to polish up his skills.

• Trip goes to Iraq and makes contact with Kurdish anti-Hussein elements. They

run some ops.

• Trip makes contact with an Iranian national who works for CIA. Asks him to

check into getting him in and out of country for a quick, one-day op.

• Trip contacts Walker, asks for favor: he wants to go into Iran to retrieve a package

that has something to do with JP, doesn’t want people to know about it. Walker

contacts “a friend” who agrees to take him, but tells Trip to be careful because it’s

a private operation with no CIA support. Separately, two unknown people then

have conversation, one says, “your hunch was right—the Stein kid is trying to go

into Iran. Like father like son?” Other: “I always said genetics trumped

environment.”

• Finale

o “Elmer Pyle” listed as the father on a

new birth certificate generates an alert

on an unknown person’s computer.

o Trip goes into Iran to retrieve the

package from the “hiding place” Joe

told him about. He finds a waterproof

bag containing the airmail letter with

hearts and JP’s notes on the flyer from

talking to the Corpsman. As he

pockets the information, two unknown

men who appear to be assailants

appear.

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SET LOCATIONS

While there is plenty of action, (Dis)Honorable is primarily a character story so its

physical world is relatively limited.

Primary Locations

Military Bases

A significant number of scenes in the series take place on

military bases, including boot camp, infantry school, and

desert combat/covert operations training.

Urban Middle Eastern City

Tehran plays a central role in the first season and locations

in other middle eastern cities, including Beirut and Baghdad,

are used in later seasons.

A location agreement with a large military base (such as Camp Pendleton or MCB

Twenty-Nine Palms) could probably serve nearly all these location needs. Stock

footage or a few location shoots of MCB Quantico would also be required.

Minor Locations

New York City and Westchester

Trip’s recruitment and training in the pilot are primarily in the New York City and

surrounding area, and he occasionally revisits. A few location shots are required but

many shots could probably use stock NYC footage to convey location.

A variety of other exterior shots are required to set locational context in story areas

such as Washington DC, Oklahoma City and Beirut.