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    Signpost Words

    The art of signposting is using key words and

    phrases to enable the reader or the listener to

    navigate their way through your argument. Hereare some signposting words which will prove

    invaluable in that process. You may have your

    own favorites.

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    Highlighting or emphasizing a point

    Importantly, …

    Indeed, …

    In fact, …More importantly, …

    Furthermore, …

    It is also important to highlight …

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    Changing direction or creating a

    comparisonHowever, …

    Rather, …

    In contrast, …

    Conversely, …On one hand, …

    On the other hand, …

    In comparison, …

    Compared to …

    Another point to consider is …

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    Adding a similar point

    Similarly, …

    Likewise, …

    Again, …Also, …

    Summarising

    Finally, …

    Lastly, …

    In conclusion, …

    To summarise, …In summary, …

    Overall, …

    The three main points are …

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    ACADEMIC WRITING

    Being more specific

    In particular, …

    In relation to …

    More specifically, …

    With respect to …In terms of …

    Giving an example

    For instance, …

    For example, …this can be illustrated by …

    …, namely, …

    …, such as …

    Acknowledging something and

    moving to a different point

    Although …

    Even though …

    Despite …

    Notwithstanding …

    Following a line of reasoning

    Therefore, …

    Subsequently, …

    Hence …

    Consequently, …Accordingly, …

    As a result, …

    As a consequence, …

    To this end, …

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    Building on the last section

    having established that

    if so

    in order to

    in that/this case

    in this connection

    moreover

    so

    that/which implies

    then

    Adding

    also, and, as well (as)

    besides

    furthermore

    in addition

    similarly

    Examples

    as an illustration

    exemplifying this

    for example

    for instance

    Reformulating an idea

    again

    alternatively/an alternative is

    in other words

    on the other hand

    or

    ratherthat is

    Result

    accordingly

    as a resultconsequently

    for this reason

    hence

    so

    then

    therefore

    ACADEMIC WRITING

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    Describing Table

    By Muhammad Fuad

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    The Difference between Bar and Table

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    The Difference between Bar and Table

    Country GNP per head

    (1982: US

    dollars)

    Daily calorie

    supply per head

    Life expectancy

    at birth (years)

    Infant

    mortality (per

    1000 live births

    Bangladesh

    Bolivia

    EgyptIndonesia

    USA

    140

    570

    690580

    13160

    1877

    2086

    29502296

    3653

    40

    50

    5649

    74

    132

    124

    9787

    12

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    Analysing IELTS Table

    • Do not describe all the data presented - present

    the main points of each feature (you should make

    sure you mention each feature though).

    • Look for significant data; e.g. the highest, the

    lowest etc.

    • Try and group the data. This may require you to

    use some general knowledge about the world,such as recognising developed and developing

    countries.

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    Example

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five

    countries.

    Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.

    You should write at least 150 words.

    Country GNP per head

    (1982: US

    dollars)

    Daily calorie

    supply per head

    Life expectancy

    at birth (years)

    Infant

    mortality (per

    1000 live births

    Bangladesh

    Bolivia

    Egypt

    Indonesia

    USA

    140

    570

    690

    580

    13160

    1877

    2086

    2950

    2296

    3653

    40

    50

    56

    49

    74

    132

    124

    97

    87

    12

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    Writing Plan

    • What is the table measuring?

    • What type of language do you need to use(Change? Comparing and contrasting?)

    • What tense would you use? Which country hasthe best quality of life and which has the worst?

    • What information could you use for an overview /conclusion?

    How could you group the information?• How many paragraphs would you have and what

    you would write about in each one?

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    Writing Plan

    • Topic – standard of living, 5 countries

    • Language – comparison

    • Time / tense – 1982 = past• Overview – USA far higher

    • Groups :

    1. USA = highest2. Egypt, Indo, Bol = similar

    3. Bangladesh = very low

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    The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in fiveselected countries in 1982. Overall  , it can be seen that the quality of life in the USA

    was far higher than the other four countries.

    To begin, the USA, which is a developed country, had   the highest  Gross national

    product (GNP) at 13,160 dollars per head. It also had a  much higher  daily calorie

    intake and life expectancy, and  the lowest rate of infant mortality.

    The other developing countries had quality of life ratings that were   significantly 

    lower . The range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were  similar  , with

    Egypt having   the highest  quality of life amongst the three. However, the infant 

    mortality rate in Egypt’s was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000

    compared to 78 in Indonesia.

    Bangladesh had  by far the lowest  quality of life in all the indicators. Its GNP was

    one hundred times smaller than the USA’s. Its calorie intake and life expectancy 

    were   about half those of  the USA, and its infant mortality rate was   10 times

    greater .

    Result

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    Example 2

    You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

    The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School

    Types Between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and

    reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

    Write at least 150 words.SECONDARY SCHOOL ATTENDANCE

    2000 2005 2009

    Specialist Schools 12% 11% 10%

    Grammar Schools 24% 19% 12%

    Voluntary-

    controlled Schools52% 38% 20%

    Community

    Schools12% 32% 58%

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    Writing Plan

    • Topic – School Attendance, four different types ofsecondary school

    • Language – Comparisons

    • Time – past (2000-2009)• Overview –

    1. Grammar and Voluntary-controlled school : decline

    2. Community school : the most important

    Groups –1. Declining

    2. Increasing

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    ResultThe table illustrates the percentage of school children attending four different

    types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009.

    Overall, it is evident that the specialist, grammar and voluntary-controlled schools

    experienced declines in numbers of pupils, whereas the community schools

    became the most important providers of secondary school education during the

    same period.

    To begin, the proportion in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to

    only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children

    in grammar schools -- just under one quarter -- dropped by half in the same

    period. As for the specialist schools, the relatively small percentage of pupils

    attending this type of school (12%) also fell, although not significantly.

    However, while the other three types of school declined in importance, the

    opposite was true in the case of community schools. In fact, while only a small

    minority of 12% were educated in these schools in 2000, this figure increased to

    over half of all pupils during the following nine years.

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    Example 3The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European

    countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

    Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

    comparisons where relevant.

    Proportion of household income five European countries spend on food and drink,

    housing, clothing and entertainment.

    Food and drink Housing Clothing Entertainment

    France 25% 31% 7% 13%

    Germany 22% 33% 15% 19%

    UK27% 37% 11% 11%

    Turkey 36% 20% 12% 10%

    Spain 31% 18% 8% 15%

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    Writing Plan

    • Topic – proportion of household income spendson 4 items in 5 different european countries

    • Language – Comparisons

    • Time – present• Overview –

    1. The majority : Food, Drink and Housing

    2. The minority : Clothing and Entertainment

    Groups –1. The Gaps between Housing and food and drink

    2. Two least expense

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    ResultThe table shows the amount of household income that five countries in Europe spend per

    month on four items.

    Overall, it is evident that all five countries spend the majority of their income on food and

    drink and housing, but much less on clothing and entertainment.

    Housing is the largest expenditure item for France, Germany and the UK, with all of themspending around one third of their income on this, at 30%, 33% and 37%, respectively. In

    contrast, they spend around a quarter on food and drink. However, this pattern is reversed

    for Turkey and Spain, who spend around a fifth of their income on housing, but

    approximately one third on food and drink.

    All five countries spend much less on the remaining two items. France and Spain spend theleast, at less than 10%, while the other three countries spend around the same amount,

    ranging between 13% and 15%. At 19%, Germany spends the most on entertainment,

    whereas UK and Turkey spend approximately half this amount, with France and Spain

    between the two.