Daily Edit Handouts

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• Apostrophe Comma (Other). Using the Right Word. End Punctuation. Abbreviation

Dr Maci ci’- ho1e ‘iddn n i sir t city state ‘md ZIP is 209 Buena Vista Avenuc Ea-

Na tlq?’ YE (4a409 but. ‘iou l:.tcd the street atddrc-e a. 201i Buei a Vista Drk pp

• Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause). Hyphe i. Comma (Othenp

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pl’vnant i (anal but first on bave to pa3 a toll ‘ hich can be mon. than $100000 tn d

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• Comma Other;. Using the Right Word, Apostrophe, Run-On Sentence —p

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co’int i:i.’l’icia Lad: Bc tir Maggie and Brandy the docs name used the most i- Max. —

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Comma (Other)—

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!. : i.e. (lha. 122 at,’] foil ncing a quict dramatic election became prttjdcnT fl, —

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Set a: Focus on Punctuation

• Comma (Other). Run-On Sentence, Using the Rlht Word, Apostrophe

Wiwu astionoiner Galileo observed sunspots in 1610 church leaders ere angry that

lied suggest the sun wasnt perfect today we no sunspots are just the suns relatn ci>

cola areas

• Comma Splice. Comma (To Separate Adjectives). Spelling Comma (Other)

Millior&’ of organisms live in and on our bodies, the human armpit for instence has up

to 300 naillioia bacteria in the space of a tin> insignificant pinhead.

• Comma (Parenthetical or Contrasted Elements). Hyphen, Colon, Parentheses, Apostrophe

Fnnch author Geoigc Sand borii July 1 lasO4 wa a well known rebel for the

follovung reasons among others she dressed in men clothes and smoked cigars

• Spelling. Punctuation (Title). Comma (Other), Apostrophe

According to a study pubb’hed in the April 2005 journel Archwes of Pediatrics and

Adok rent Medicine children risk of injury is decreased when second-generation

pa%PiiLn’r air bags are deployed.

• Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Hyphen. Run-On Sentence. Spelling

Head lice lay thdr eggs which are callcd nile in peoples hair consequently, just

batched un baa a ready to cat food sorct in the blood just under their scalp

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Comma (Other), Punctuation (Title). Colon, Quotation Marks

On July 25 2004 I was watching 60 Minutes and saw a tape of Martin Luther King

Jr. giving his famous speech that began with these words I have a dream.

Quotation Marks, Comma (Other), Spelling

Because they bot it with shared money Manuel and Morgan’s CD player belongs to

both of them so I can’t understand why Morgan always says That’s mine!

aHyphen, Comma (Appositive), Spelling, Using the Right Word. Comma (Other)

Won of the greatest baseball players of the 1880s and 1890s was left handed Billy

Sunday a native of Ames Iowa who was descovered by the famous player-manager Cap

Anson of the Chicago White Stockings.

aQuotation Marks, Nonstandard Language, Spelling, Apostrophe

Billy Sunday use to preach, Alcohol is an appalling source of misery and crime in the

land. His efforts helped bring about legel prohibition in the 20s and early 30s.

aQuotation Marks. Comma (Appositive), Apostrophe, Comma (Other)

Before Barbara Bash modern-day nature writer writes a book she sketches. I traveled

to East Africa to sketch the baobab trees, to southern Colorado to watch the twilight

emergence of 100,000 bats , and to New York City to find birds nests on

Iskyscraper ledges she notes.

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Set4 Focus on Capitalization and Fragments

Capitalization, Sentence Fragment, Punctuation (Title), Apostrophe

According to the book Lost cities of the Ancient world, the mayans great civilization

existed in central america. Many years before europeans discovered the americas.

Capitalization, Italics (Underlining), Colon, Comma (Other). Hyphen

Kelly’s t-shirt has the latin phrase cave canem (beware of the dog) and pictures of

these three well known dogs a german shepherd an english sheepdog and a beagle.

Capitalization, Sentence Fragment, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Spelling,

Comma (Appositive)

Queen nefertiti and her husband king amenhotep iv who came to power in egypt in

1367 b.c.e. They built the city of akhetaton in honer of the egyptian sun god aton.

Capitalization, Sentence Fragment, Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Comma (Appositive),

Semicolon

I like the south better then the north, however if I had to travel east, I would go to

new york city. The capitol of the united.- states from 1785 to 1790.

Capitalization, Sentence Fragment, Quotation Marks, Abbreviation, Comma (Other),

End Punctuation

Mr smith’s bonus question on our test was did president bush visit karen smith md?

Before or after he toured the african american and the hispanic culture fairs.

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Set : Focus on Capitalization and Comma Splices

Capitalization. Comma Splice, Using the Right Word. Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause)

The cancer drug Taxol which aunt janet took is extracted from the bark of pacific Yew

Trees that grow in washington and oregon, it takes the bark from three large trees

too treat one patient for a year.

Capitalization, Comma Splice, Apostrophe, Nonstandard Language, Comma (Other)

My sister wants to become an industrial engineer, shes gonna write to the institute of

industrial engineers in norcross georgia for more information.

Capitalization, Comma Splice, Comma (Appositive), Spelling

Archaeologist Leonard wooley set out in 1922 to look for ur a city mentioned in the

bible. Ur was the origenal home of abraham the father of the hebrew people.

Comma Splice, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Nonstandard Language, Spelling,Capitalization, Comma (Appositive)

Crow indians native americans who now live in southeastern montana use to chew

willow bark for headakes, willow bark contains salicylic acid which we call aspirin.

Capitalization, Comma Splice, Comma (Other>, Hyphen, Using the Right Word

I took biology algebra world history spanish and english last year, the academic

experience had an all together awe inspiring affect on me.

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5et4 $ocus on Plurals, Numbers, and Abbreviations

c Numbers, Plurals. Abbreviation, Apostrophe, Comma (Other). Spelling

My mothers recipe says to use 2 T. of chili powder and 6 handsful of rice but both

my brother-in-laws like x-tra chili powder and less rice.

Plurals, Numbers, Abbreviation, Apostrophe, Comma (Other), Capitalization

All 6 companies boards of directors met in the studioes of the hoover building at the

corner of hwy. thirty-six and state st. on feb. 7 2007.

Numbers, Apostrophe, Comma Splice, Hyphen, Abbreviation, Capitalization

12th century physician Maimonides believed that chicken soup cured colds, in nineteen

aninety-three doctor stephen rennard used his wifes grandmothers recipe and found ascientific proof for the old belief a

aPlurals, Run-On Sentence, Comma (Other). Apostrophe a

aPeople who serve on jurys dont always face equal dutys some jurys decide cases in

minutes but others take days.

aPlurals. Nonstandard Language. Comma Splice, Comma (Other) a

aThe criterions for becoming a juror have changed, once jurors were witness’s who

already knew the facts of a case but now jurors are suppose to know nothing about a

case before trial,aaa

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Set : Focus on RambLing and Run-On Sentences

c Run-On Sentence, Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Plurals

Is their a lake in south america full of gold and jewels Incan Indian chieves honored

there gods by throwing jewels into a lake and jumping in, coated with gold powder.

Rambling Sentence, Apostrophe, Using the Right Word, Comma (Other)

The moon is out during the day just as much as at mght hut sometimes the sun

is so bright you cant see the moon and if the sun werent so bright, you could see

planets and stars airight, to.

ICapitalization, Comma (Other), Punctuation (Title), Run-On Sentence. Spelling, Numbers

Your odds of appering on the Tonight Show are one in 490.000 your odds of being

killed by lightning are one in 4 million your odds of winning the reader’s digest

sweepstakes are one in two hundred thirteen million.

Rambling Sentence, Comma (Other), Capitalization, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause),Apostrophe

On June 6 1642 an earthquake struck Port Royal jamaica and Port Royal was the

home of many pirates and all the riches of the pirates fell into the sea along with

the city so scuba divers are still looking for pirates treasure there.

Run-On Sentence, Numbers, Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language

Bowling.alley mechanics must no something about electronics most of them work

around about 40 hours a week and earn over twenty thousand dollars annually

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Set 8: Focus on Pronoun Problems

c Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Capitalization, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause),Using the Right Word, Punctuation (Title)

Everyone who knows their american history knows that Harriet Beecher Stowe whose

the author of Uncle Tom’s Cabin had alot to do with stirring up emotions that lead to

the civil war.

Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Pronoun (Case), Quotation Marks, Capitalization,Comma (Other), Using the Right Word

My Dad and me wanted to capture a baby moose and take it home said Sven but

than we found out they might grow to 2000 pounds.

Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement. Using the Right Word, Abbreviation, Nonstandard Language,Spelling

Its true that anybody whose had Ms Anderson give them a literture assinement could

of been confused about the amount of pages to read.

c Pronoun (Case), Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Run-On Sentence

My Mother and me saw you’re play lass week anyone whose seen it is likely to feel

quiet effected by the last seen.

Pronoun (Case), Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Comma (Other)

Neither Tansy nor me qualified for the state swim meet but either Anna or Josie won

all their events.

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Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Using the Right Word, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase orClause), Capitalization

The african elephant who is the largest living land animal uses their ears as fans.

Pronoun (Case), Indefinite Pronoun Reference, Comma (Other)

When Brad and me took the dog to the veterinarian last week he started to run

around in circles until we succeeded in calming him down.

Pronoun (Case), Quotation Marks, Using the Right Word, Spelling, End Punctuation

To who do Oswald and myself report when we get to school asked the girl who’s

cloths seemed like they came from another centery?

aPronoun (Case), Using the Right Word, Hyphen, Comma Splice

Their is a marsh bird called a bittern, it’s low pitched call sounds alot like a foghorn

to my brother and myself

ac Pronoun (Case), Indefinite Pronoun Reference, Quotation Marks, Comma (Parenthetical or aContrasted Elements)

The little girl read her favorite part to Sam and I: The woodsman brought the shiny Ia

ax down hard not on the wolf’s tail but on a large rock instead and it cracked into a ahundred pieces! a

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4SeOaOcuson Verb Problems

c Subject-Verb Agreement, Comma (Parenthetical or Contrasted Elements), Using the Right Word,I

Plurals I

IMexico City as well as other large citys of the world are growing to quickly for its

citizens to set back and do nothing to remedy the problems.

ISubject-Verb Agreement, Plurals, Colon, Comma (Other), Apostrophe

Each of the worlds largest citys are facing problems garbage and sewage is hard to

remove and food or water are often in short supply.

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Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Spelling

Everybody who has had hypothermia know that speech and coordination is usualy

aeffected by it.

aSubject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Verb (Tense)

Each of the books that is laying on the table is suppose to learn you something.

aUsing the Right Word, Comma (Other), Spelling, Verb (Irregular)

The road lead me to a quite meadow and I lied down and rested there without

knowing to who the feud belonged.

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Set 1i Focus on Verb Problems

Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Quotation Marks, Comma (Other), Capitalization,Spelling

P11 be glad to borrow you my pet cockroach say Sally if you’ll leave me borrow your

rat next wensday.

Subject-Verb Agreement, Verb (Tense), Comma Splice, Hyphen, Comma (Other)

Robotics are the study of robot technology if you wants to enter a cutting edge field

that paid well you could become a robotics technician.

Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word. Capitalization, Quotation Marks,End Punctuation, Run-On Sentence

Can I leave now asked Jake my Sister need my car so she can bring my Aunt to

you’re house.

Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Comma (Other)

I wish those squirrels would let us alone but they is even getting into the walls in

the kitchen,

Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement

You can be allowed to bring the test home with you unless the faculty committee

disagrees among itself about weather to give you that much freedom.

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Set i: Focus on Adjective/Adverb Form

Adjective Form, Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language, Article

A tropical orb weaver Spider can spin an web that is largest then almost any other

spider’s (up to 15 feet acrost).

Using the Right Word, Comma (Other), Comma Splice, Numbers, Indefinite Pronoun Reference,Adverb Form

4 to 8 seconds after you swallow your food is all ready in you’re stomach, it purees byour food quick and efficient,

Adverb Form, Using the Right Word, Comma (Other), Dash

If the blood vessels in you’re body were stretched end to end they’d easy span 12000

miles almost halfway around the world.

Adjective Form, Double Negative, Capitalization, Comma (Unnecessary), Hyphen

I can’t hardly believe this chapter about fourteenth century europe and the Black

Death, which killed one fourth of the population, and was the worse plague in history

Adjective Form, Double Negative, Nonstandard Language, Using the Right Word, Comma (Other)

I ain’t got no clue how this happened but I all ready owe Jeff most than Tyler does.

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Set i Focus on Dangling and Misplaced Modifiers

Dangling Modifier, Comma (Other), Spelling, Article

When passing the ball in a professional football game the pass is completed a avrage

of .55 percent of the time.

Misplaced Modifier, Comma Splice, Spelling, Using the Right Word

My dog all ready had laser surgery on his cataracts that worked well, now he’s

supposed to get a pacemaker for his heart that keeps a regular rythum.

Dangling Modifier, Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Comma (Appositive)

Running good that day, the race was won by Paul Bly an insurance agent from

Boston Massachusetts.

Misplaced Modifier, Spelling, Using the Right Word

You usally do not have to become a police officer to take college coarses.

Misplaced Modifier, Hyphen, Using the Right Word

High tech medical machines can be adopted for animals that were first developed for

people.

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Set i: Focus on Deadwood/WordinessI

Deadwood/Wordiness, Punctuation (Title), Comma (Other), Rambling Sentence

With “Auto Vision” you can be able to watch The Simpsons while you’re also driving

a vehicle, and the invention projects the TV picture onto a reflective windshield mirror

o you can watch the TV image and the road concurrently at the same time.

Hyphen, Comma (Other), Deadwood/Wordiness. Spelling

If it happened to he the case that you lived in England over 100 years ago in the

mid nineteenth centery then you quite probably would have felt there was a necessity

to wait around until the moon in the sky was waxing (appearing larger) each night to

cut your hair hoping that the likelihood would exist that it would grow hack thicker.

Deadwood/Wordiness, Verb (Tense), Capitalization, Apostrophe

Although Galileo is fbr all practical purposes virtually the most respected renaissance

scientist, he was most sadly and erroneously mistaken about the basic origin of the

moons dark areas, which he in actuality believes were most definitely watery seas.

Deadwood/Wordiness, Comma Splice, Double Negative, Using the Right Word, Spelling

Sharks are certainly as busy as bees, they can’t never sleep and must swim day in

and day out because they need water flowing over they’re gills to breath.

Deadwood/Wordiness, Using the Right Word, Misplaced Modifier, Comma (Other)

Because of the fact that you through the ring out the car window that I gave you

I really feel that our relationship is over and done with.

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Set: Focus on Parallel Structure and Fair Languar S

Parallel Structure. Capitalization. Using the Right Word. Apostrophe. Plurals

Alter world war II. a great amount of women left. jobs in amencas factorvs and

profe’sion. w become full timc wite- mother- and they kept households running

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( Fair Language. Parallel Structure. CapItalization. Apostrophe. Comma (Other

Maize attempt.: Is’ at rid of slaven before Ui’ civil wet included debatet- convention

novel- auuinst slave propoiad law- and soniecnw tool’ RI: antislavery case before the-

Supreme Lout L

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Q Parallel Structure. FaIr Language. Comma (Appositive,. Apostrophe Using the Right Word

Comma (Other.

Man ¶atc r stewardec u chairman of the parents counsel which hears complaint’

give- advice am! i runnini. c’ toy-lending librar;

• Fair Language. Punctuation (Title), Run-On Sentence. Using the Right Word. Apostrophe.

Comma (Parenthetical or Contrasted Elements)

Betty Friedan’s book Tin Feminine Mystique published in 1963 inspired a second wavc

of thu women movement in the Urnted Statet this movement had laid dormant since

glib earned the right to vote in 1920.

• Fair Language. Using the Right Word, Spelling

Scientists sa that in the future a peron will be able to dry a hole load ot clothes in

liii mtcroa ave dnei it’ fi e or ten mink

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Set i6: Mixed Review

@ Subject-Verb Agreement. Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Using the Right Word,

Comma (Other)

When ou sleep you’re senses shut down accept for you’re hearing which remain acute

throughout the night.

Comma Splice, Using the Right Word, Subject-Verb Agreement

It is a well tongue that speak no ill, it is a better heart that think none.

Run-On Sentence. Using the Right Word. Spelling

Psychotics and eeople which are everelv ill often find it impossable to yawn yawning

a iign of good health.

Shift in Construction, Spelling, Comma (Other)

Vote: Correct the second part of the shift in construction.

(Doerly speaking the more stress we thee during the day, the more likely it is ouIl

ace nightmares at night.

Spelling, Punctuaton (Title), Comma (Appositive), Apostrophe

Don Quixote is the central character in Man of La Mancha a play based on Cervantes

eveiiteenth-centerv novel Don Quixote.

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Set i: Mixed Review

Spelling. Comma (Other), Verb (Tense). Using the Right Word

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1’ iii ..1t1’(I iii’ ii 0111(1 ;xopie

t Subject-Veib Agwernent Capitalization Comma (Other). Fair Language, Using the Right WordNumber.

I tie th v t n in of I thor vstimat that then i about 1.100 000 ‘ceretane’, in tin

ot 1fl’tu ‘ ‘ k un dc.itt,ar) b juld fat shi i’ alone’.

c Nonstandard La,,gbagc Using the Right Word, Abbreviation. Comma (Othe’) Article

I •n • • it k’, nl:I%h’ to y oil i haxd a.. vou’n e51 fl)j)%5l(’ do you’d half .( II

. , f ‘ in.. c’aal tin

( Adjectn,e Form. Nonstandard Language. Plurals. Using the Right Word, Shift In Construction

1% ijia ‘ nit d.rk t’ Jfl• .uppost 1° IUlcL’ mona quirkPr n’flr,c then people iitlt 1.iir

• .. :ti,(t tilt —. lilt ‘V.1 tnii— of auin.aI

® Spelling. Comma (Other). Abbreviation. Verb (Tensei

.\t 11i’ 1111.11 oi th’ c’ uhF H bardi c’f oil front Kuwait it. pnvc’cI at 30 do1lar.

Set iS: Mixed Review

Using the Right Word, Comma (Other), Parentheses or Dashes

it wood take about 200000 frowns and that’s a large amount to create a permanent

worry wrinkle on you’re forehead.

Hyphen, Comma (Other). Article, Spelling

Amona college educated professionals between the ages of 25 and 34 women earned a

avrage of’ seventy cents to every dollar earned by men in 2003 but women held 60

percent of all managment jobs.

Verb (Tense), Subject-Verb Agreement. Comma (Appositive>

Chocolate contain phenylethylarnine the same chemical the brain produces when people

1ll in lovc.

Subject-Verb Agreement. Comma (Other). Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement. Using the Right Word

The brain quadruple in size from birth to adulthood but they shrink by more then an

ounce from adulthood to retirement,

Comma (Unnecessary). Using the Right Word, Plurals, Parallel Structure, Comma (Other)

People, who are left-handed, suffer more then “righties” do from migraines, allergvs.

dyslexia stuttering and some of these people have thyroid disorders.

Set 1,: Mixed Review

Capitalization, Spelling, Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word

The Human brain countinue to send out electrical wave signals four as long as 37

hours after death.

Spelling, Capitalization, Hyphen, Numbers

The Federal goverment predicted that by the year 2012 nearly one fifth of the

american labor force would be fifty-five or older.

Dangling Modifier, Spelling, Verb (Tense), Capitalization

Deprived of vision and hearing, freinds of helen keller use to be identified by smell

alone.

wc Using the Right Word, Capitalization, Hyphen, Italics (Underlining)

“Cocoa” is the weigh english speaking people wood spell the spanish word cacao.

Deadwood/Wordiness, Spelling, Comma (Other), Italics (Underlining)

It is a fact that in just about every human languge the word for mother begins with

the m sound.

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Set 20: Mixed Review —

Apostrophe, Comma (Other), Using the Right Word

In order to retire buy 2030 on todays equivalent of $2000 a month 42-years-old

workers have to set aside $8000 a year starting now.

Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Numbers, Hyphen, Spelling, Apostrophe

The Black Death which killed at least 38.000,000 people in forteenth century Europe

and China slowed the worlds population growth.

c Using the Right Word, Spelling, Run-On Sentence

The weigh dogs sweat is differnt than the weigh humans sweat dogs sweat only threw

there mouths.

Spelling, Subject-Verb Agreement, Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Using the Right Word

If the human population of the earth countinue to increase at their present rate, the

world’s population will reach 9.3 billion by the year 3530. —

c Subject-Verb Agreement, Article, Spelling, Numbers, Comma (Other), Deadwood/Wordiness —

The humen population of the earth swell by a avrage of 199000 people every single —

day, or approximately 74,000,000 every single, solitary year. —

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t31Mied Review

Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Plurals, Subject-Verb Agreement

At the turn of the twenty-first century more then half of all college students and 00

almost half of all workers was woman. p

PCapitalization, Abbreviation, Article

Every lb. of additional fat creates a extra 200 mi. of blood capillaries in the Human Pp

body PPpApostrophe, Capitalization, Spelling, Deadwood/Wordiness

Soon the majoritey of american schoolchildren they wont be white. P

pc Subject-Verb Agreement, Hyphen. Comma Splice, Comma (Other) p

PA mollusk is a soft bodied animal that have no bones, slugs snails clams and squids

are all mollusks, P0’0’

Punctuation (Title), Quotation Marks, Nonstandard Language, Using the Right Word, 0’Capitalization, Comma (Other)

The english poet Alfred Tennyson, in his poem In Memoriam, wrote ‘Tis better too of 0’0’

loved and lost then never too of loved at all. 0’0’0’0’0’01

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Set 22: Mixed Review

Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language, Comma Splice, Spelling, Abbreviation

Their is a growing need for nurses in America’s hospitles, full-time registered nurses

in hospitles earn anywheres from 34,000 dollars to 69,000 dollars per year.

Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Colon, Comma (Other), Parallel Structure

The following countries have a marine corps as part of they’re military operations

araentina brazil chile the philippines south korea and there are also marines in spain

and the united ,tates,

Plurals, Capitalization. Apostrophe, Hyphen

Presently Mayors in one third of our nations largest citys are non-caucasians.

Italics (Underlining), Using the Right Word, Comma (Other)

Aut viam inveniam ant faciam is a Latin phrase that means, “Where theirs a will

theirs a way.”

IUsing the Right Word, Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement, Subject-Verb Agreement

Both Colleen and Matt is setting in the waiting room as she and he were asked to.

Set23: Mixed Review

Comma (Other), Capitalization, Apostrophe, Numbers

On july 5 1975 Arthur Ashe became the 1st african american player to win the mens

singles tennis title at wimbledon, england.

Capitalization, Comma (Other), Spelling, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause)

Communism Fascism and Capitalism were favorate targets of american author Upton

Sinclair who died November 25 1968 having written more than 80 books.

Adverb Form, Using the Right Word, Spelling

Ocupational therapists learn physical or psychological impaired people to adjust to

everyday living.

Capitalization, Parentheses, Comma (Other)

In the jungles of northern kampuchea the country of kampuchea is now cambodia the

hindu people built the city of angkor.

Comma Splice, Capitalization, Hyphen

I belonged to the boys and girls’ club when I was younger I still have the t shirt.

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5Øt24 Mixed Review

Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Dash, Adverb Form, Plurals

Since the cost of maintaining an older car is less then the cost of replacing it the

800,000 or more auto mechanics in the United States especially those with training in

new technologys usually find employment quick.

c Abbreviation, Verb (Tense), Numbers, Deadwood/Wordiness

It is estimate that the population of the U.S. it could hit four hundred million in 2029.

Comma (Unnecessary), Abbreviation, Parentheses, Subject-Verb Agreement

The roadrunner eat rattlesnakes, tarantulas, and bats, among other things and can run

20 mph.

Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Numbers, Run-On Sentence, Comma (Other)

Compared to a Human the Rhinoceros Beetle is amazing it may lift eight hundred

fifty times it’s own wait.

Subject-Verb Agreement, Numbers, Comma (Other), Double Negative, Using the Right Word

15 species of whiptail lizards don’t has no males but that don’t effect them too much:

They reproduce through cloning.

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%z Mixed Review

c Numbers, Using the Right Word, Subject-Verb Agreement, Abbreviation

Their is about two and a half million building custodians in the United States, manyof who earn more then 10 dollars per hour.

Capitalization, Spelling, Comma Splice

Julio’s favorate kind of dog is the german shepherd because his dad has one, Carmen’sfavorate is the beagle because her grandmother and grandfather’s dog is a beagle.

CApostrophe, Hyphen, Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause)

The 10 story Home Insurance Company Building in Chicago which was completed in1885 was the worlds first skyscraper.

*Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Run-On Sentence, Spelling

Some vegetarians eat fish but they refuse meet from mammals some vegetarians eatmilk and eggs some eat only fruits and vegtables and some eat only raw fruits andvegtables.

Comma (Appositive), Capitalization, Verb (Tense), Comma (Unnecessary)

Los Angeles laker, Kareem Abdul-Jabbar, the highest scorer in the history of the nbaracked up 38,387 points by the time he retires in 1989.

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5126: Mixed Review

c Using the Right Word, Apostrophe, Hyphen

You loose about one half to three fourths of you’re bodys heat by not covering you’re

head in the cold.

Capitalization, Apostrophe, Hyphen, Run-On Sentence, Using the Right Word

Vatican city in Rome is the worlds smallest country it’s area is one sixth of a square

mile.

Punctuation (Titfe), Quotation Marks, Comma (Other), Spelling, Hyphen, End Punctuation,Apostrophe

“By the way did you read the pamphlit called The Power of Parentheses Nicole asked

her mother in laws secreterv

Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language. Capitalization, Comma Splice, Spelling, Plurals

Prairie-dog communitys use too extend for miles and house millions of prairie dogs in

our Western United States, now such colonies are practically nonexistant.

Hyphen. Nonstandard Language, Numbers

Left handed people make up around about four percent of the world’s population.

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Mixed Review

Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Comma Splice, Apostrophe, Using the Right Word,Comma (Other), Capitalization

Cambodia which lays North and West of Vietnam bases its economy on agriculture,

farmers crops include mainly rice and corn, but many farmers also raise cattle buffalo

pigs and chickens.

Spelling, Capitalization, Subject-Verb Agreement, Numbers, Comma (Other)

In the United States Goverment each of the 3 branches play a very critical role.

Apostrophe, Subject-Verb Agreement, Comma (Other), Spelling, Using the Right Word

Sinse the tragedy of her famous husbands death in 1968 Coretta Scott King have

continued to work for piece and nonviolent social change.

Comma (Appositive), Hyphen, Using the Right Word, Spelling, Comma (Unnecessary)

Isadora Duncan (1878, 1927) one of the principle founders of modern dance beleived in

using the rythums of nature to inspire fisical movements.

Subject-Verb Agreement, Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language, Sentence Fragment

Radar, an electronic device who bounce radio waves off of objects to detect there

location and speed.

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Mixed Review

Hyphen, Comma (Other), Capitalization

Covering 9360000 square miles, north america is the world’s third largest Continent.

Using the Right Word, Comma (Other), Subject-Verb Agreement, Comma (Appositive),Capitalization

There was no less then 28000 people killed on the island of Martinique when MountPelée a volcano erupted there in the Spring of 1902.

Using the Right Word, End Punctuation, Apostrophe

I wonder if George Bush and Bill Clinton new that Thomas Jeffersons vice presidentduring his second term was named George Clinton?

Comma (Nonrestrictive Phrase or Clause), Comma (Other), Using the Right Word, Deadwood/Wordiness, Adjective Form

Jupiter which lays between Mars and Saturn is the most largest planet circling oursun but because Jupiter rotates each and every 10 hours it’s day is the most shortest.

c. Comma (Other), Subject-Verb Agreement, Italics (Underlining), Using the Right Word,Capitalization

During the 1941 japanese attack on pearl harbor almost half of the 2403 people whomdied was on the battleship Arizona, which took a bomb down its smokestack.

Set 29: Mixed Review

Pronoun Usage, Comma (Appositive), Capitalization

The author of the James Bond novels Ian Fleming was hisseif a british secret agent

during world war IL

c Comma Splice, Double Negative, Capitalization, Apostrophe

Chop suey isnt hardly a true Chinese dish, it’s a Chinese american dish.

Using the Right Word, Comma (Appositive), Apostrophe, Double Negative, Abbreviation

Franklin Pierce U.S. president from 1853 to 1857 didnt like no politics and didnt

chose to be president.

Abbreviation. Verb (Tense). Comma (Unnecessary), Capitalization. Using the Right Word

As of August. 2005. the Dept. of Defense employs more personal than any other

Federal agency—654,000 civilian employees.

Capitalization, Using the Right Word, Nonstandard Language

Did you ask aunt Bessie if she was gonna visit you’re mother on her trip to the

.ourhwest?

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et3o: Mixed Review

Using the Right Word, Spelling, Capitalization

It is pour manners to say that the south is better then the north, or vise versa.

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Using the Right Word, Apostrophe, Comma (Other), Plurals

The fungi who caused Ben and Ralph’s athletes foot lived first on Bens skin and

nail’s and then was spread when Ralph shared Bens towel socks or shoes.

Capitalization. Semicolon, Spelling, Comma (Appositive), Using the Right Word

Some people who made the panama canal possable include John Stevens the chief

engineer David Gaillard the engineer in charge of digging threw mountains and

William Gorgas the medical officer who eliminated yellow fever.

Spelling, Using the Right Word, Fair Language, Nonstandard Language

Mosquitoes have caused alot of miserie to men acrost the world by spreading deadly

diseases.

Nonstandard Language, Comma (Appositive), Hyphen, Article

Martha’s Vineyard a island off the southwestern shore of Cape Cod use to be a

important whaling center but now is a well known summer resort.

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