2
CREATIVE WRITING To: Ms. Abby Pariente From: Varona, Maria Donnabelle B. Date: October 1, 2015 Topic: Flash Fiction (max of 300 words) Title: Hell I had no idea what happened to me. How and why is all a blur and everything just happened so fast. I was falling, but not in a fast speed. it was like in space but I was plummeting into a narrow tunnel with red walls. Random colors and smoke were swirling around me, I saw distorted faces and heard voices of wailing and crying. "Is this the way to hell? Am I dying?" I thought. A few seconds, the tunnel ended and I splashed into a pool. I swam upward and realized it was the pool of my school, where I almost drowned a few hours ago. Then I remembered! A while ago, I had an accident, when some girl made fun of me and pushed me right into the water. I don't swim that's why I panicked and eventually started to drown, then I got unconscious and didn't know what happened next. Going back, I continued to drown and sink, but as I sank the water twirled around me and brought me to a different place. I woke up in a small, pitchblack room. Then I heard footsteps and a door knob, opening. I saw a glint of light, and a silhouette of a girl. She closed the door immediately and so did the light. It was black again, then she opened a spotlight right above me. Then there she was, the girl who pushed me into the swimming pool. Then bang! I understand now why she hated me. She was one of the freshmen who I made fun of as a dare because I was a senior. "I may have killed you already, but this is hell baby. A place where we can all reapeat it again." she said.

Crea Wri

Embed Size (px)

DESCRIPTION

jhjhjh

Citation preview

Page 1: Crea Wri

CREATIVE WRITINGTo: Ms. Abby ParienteFrom: Varona, Maria Donnabelle B.Date: October 1, 2015Topic: Flash Fiction (max of 300 words)Title: Hell

I had no idea what happened to me. How and why is all a blur and everything just happened so fast.

I was falling, but not in a fast speed. it was like in space but I was plummeting into a narrow tunnel with red walls. Random colors and smoke were swirling around me, I saw distorted faces and heard voices of wailing and crying. "Is this the way to hell? Am I dying?" I thought. A few seconds, the tunnel ended and I splashed into a pool. I swam upward and realized it was the pool of my school, where I almost drowned a few hours ago. Then I remembered! A while ago, I had an accident, when some girl made fun of me and pushed me right into the water. I don't swim that's why I panicked and eventually started to drown, then I got unconscious and didn't know what happened next.

Going back, I continued to drown and sink, but as I sank the water twirled around me and brought me to a different place. I woke up in a small, pitchblack room. Then I heard footsteps and a door knob, opening. I saw a glint of light, and a silhouette of a girl. She closed the door immediately and so did the light. It was black again, then she opened a spotlight right above me. Then there she was, the girl who pushed me into the swimming pool.

Then bang! I understand now why she hated me. She was one of the freshmen who I made fun of as a dare because I was a senior. "I may have killed you already, but this is hell baby. A place where we can all reapeat it again." she said.

Word Count: 292

Page 2: Crea Wri