Cover letter for A3

This is a photo essay and my theme is parkour. This photo essay takes me a lot of time

but I didn’t get a good score is because the mistake I made that I wrote my article firstly so it’s

hard to match photos very well. I have to use photo shop to redo the article and it gave me a lot

trouble. Therefore this review gives me a chance to correct most of the mistakes I made.

The biggest problem is there is one part of the article is duplicated, and some of the

descriptions irrelative to the topic of my essay. For example the first page the first paragraph:

I’m used to be very popular and never thought making friends is a problem for me. However

things are different here, because of the language barrier and different culture background. I

deleted it and re-write another paragraph.

What’s more, because of the bad management of the article, some of the pages have a

very long paragraph but some of the pages only have a few sentences. This is not balance and

makes the whole photo essay kind of messy. Considering about this, I re-ranged the devotion of

each page so it looks better.

What’s more, the original photos are kind of too full of the whole page, so it looks the

page is too crowded. This time, I change the background size to 1200*800 pixies so there are

enough margins that make the page less crowded.

The comments is about the unmatched article and the photos which is exactly the place I

made mistake, so Dr. Emre took several points for this part. Except for this, the article was

messy because of the duplication which makes the whole article hard to read.