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August/September Webquest 2013 • LibrarySparks • 1 Introduction The Society of Children’s Mystery Writers is eager to discover and encourage promising young writers of mystery fiction. We’re announcing a competition to find the best junior authors of mystery fiction in the state. Based on detailed plot outlines and summaries of books in progress, we will award publishing contracts to the winners! Will your entry be chosen? Task You will start by watching a video of a detective story to get your creative juices flowing. Then, you will choose one of four popular authors of mysteries to learn about, along with the subgenre of mystery literature that author writes. Choose carefully! That will be the type of mystery story you will develop as your contest entry. After using web links to research your author and subgenre, you will meet with other junior authors who made the same choice to brainstorm original story ideas. From there, you will return to your computer station, where you will use online tools to develop your story and organize your plans into drafts of the plot outline and summary. At a second meeting with your author/subgenre group, you will review and critique each other’s work. Finally, you will polish your outline and summary and submit them to the Society of Children’s Mystery Writers competition. Process 1. As a group, read the introduction above and watch actor Esai Morales reading Private I. Guana: The Case of the Missing Chameleon, by Nina Laden, at www.storylineonline.net/iguana/fullscreen_yt.html. 2. Gather your supplies—paper and pencil for taking notes—and find a computer workstation. Calling All Mystery Writers Grades 5–6 Mystery Writers Webquest Technology Webquest • by | Diane Findlay
Calling All Mystery Writers - LibrarySparks€¦ · Wendy Lamb Books, 2012. Max Finder Mystery: Collected Casebook, Volume 1, by Liam O’Donnell. Owlkids Books, 2010. Room One: A
Introduction
The Society of Children’s Mystery Writers is eager to discover and
encourage promising young writers of mystery fiction. We’re
announcing a competition to find the best junior authors of mystery
fiction in the state. Based on detailed plot outlines and summaries
of books in progress, we will award publishing contracts to the
winners! Will your entry be chosen?
Task
You will start by watching a video of a detective story to get your
creative juices flowing. Then, you will choose one of four popular
authors of mysteries to learn about, along with the subgenre of
mystery literature that author writes. Choose carefully! That will
be the type of mystery story you will develop as your contest
entry. After using web links to research your author and subgenre,
you will meet with other junior authors who made the same choice to
brainstorm original story ideas. From there, you will return to
your computer station, where you will use online tools to develop
your story and organize your plans into drafts of the plot outline
and summary. At a second meeting with your author/subgenre group,
you will review and critique each other’s work. Finally, you will
polish your outline and summary and submit them to the Society of
Children’s Mystery Writers competition.
Process
1. As a group, read the introduction above and watch actor Esai
Morales reading Private I. Guana: The Case of the Missing
Chameleon, by Nina Laden, at
www.storylineonline.net/iguana/fullscreen_yt.html.
2. Gather your supplies—paper and pencil for taking notes—and find
a computer workstation.
Calling All Mystery Writers
Webquest
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3. Choose one of the popular children’s mystery authors below. You
will study the author’s mystery subgenre and develop ideas for an
original story of the same type.
Wendelin Van Draanen, Kid Detective Stories
Eric Berlin, Puzzle-Based Mysteries
Carl Hiaasen, Ecological Mysteries
4. After reading through all process steps, click on your chosen
author’s name above to access part 1 of your online research guide.
Complete part 1—Be sure to read the text in each prompt and between
web links so you know exactly what you are looking for on each
site. Not all websites you will visit are written for kids, so you
might need a dictionary. Print part 1 when you are done.
5. Gather with others who chose the same author and subgenre to
brainstorm and share ideas for original stories.
6. Armed with creative ideas, complete Part 2 of the online
research guide to develop and organize your story ideas. Print your
worksheet when you
are done (pages 5-7 of this document), along with the Peer Editing
Sheet (page 16 of this document). Finish your outlines and
summaries as homework, if necessary.
7. Meet again with your author/subgenre group. Take turns reading
your summaries aloud and briefly discuss them. Find a partner.
Exchange plot outlines and summaries. Review and critique each
others’ work, using the peer editing sheet you printed. You will
review each other’s plot outlines and summaries rather than
finished stories. You will take home and turn in your partner’s
peer editing sheet on your work. You will be evaluated on the sheet
you completed about your partner’s work.
8. Use ideas from your group session to revise and improve your
outline (on the second copy you will make) and summary. Finish
revising your outlines and summaries as homework, if
necessary.
9. Submit your finished work—your completed research guides,
graphic organizer, peer editing sheet, revised outline, and story
summary—to the Society representative (your teacher).
Evaluation Conclusion Peer Editing Sheet Mystery Elements Writing
Guide Outline
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You will be evaluated on your online research guide, with graphic
organizers and printouts as assigned; your group work; and your
final plot outline and summary. A maximum of 30 points is possible,
including up to 4 discretionary points for overall excellence in
comprehension, creativity, and effort. Note: You will turn in the
peer editing sheet you used to improve your work, but you will be
evaluated on the sheet you completed on your partner’s work.
Online Guide and Graphic Organizers
Group Work
Evaluation
Needed little help beyond written directions
Needed almost no help beyond written directions
Responses on guide and organizers
Incomplete; little comprehension of concepts
Mostly complete; adequate comprehension of concepts
Complete; excellent comprehension of concepts
Sidekick 1
Gumshoe 2
Super Sleuth 3
Followed directions Group didn’t cooperate well or stay on
task
Group cooperated and stayed on task
Group cooperated enthusiastically and stayed on task
Individual participation in group
Enthusiastic participation; excellent cooperation
Little feedback or encouragement
Useful feedback and encouragement
Sidekick 1
Gumshoe 2
Not neat; many errors in spelling, grammar; and outline
format
Fairly neat; some errors in spelling, grammar; or outline
format
Very neat; almost no errors in spelling, grammar, or outline
format
Content Shows little comprehension, critical thinking, or
originality
Shows good comprehension, critical thinking, and originality
Shows excellent comprehension, critical thinking, and
originality
Interest and effort Shows little effort or interest
Shows good effort and interest
Shows excellent effort and enthusiasm
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We at The Society of Children’s Mystery Writers can not wait to
review your work and choose our winners. Who knows—maybe one of you
is the next Wendelin Van Draanen or Carl Hiaasen! Perhaps your
story plans will grow into an acclaimed series, like The Buddy
Files or The Puzzling World of Winston Breen!
If you enjoyed this webquest, you might like some of these
resources, in addition to ones you have already read about:
Fiction The Case of the Missing Cutthroats, by Jean Craighead
George. HarperCollins Reprints, 1999.
The Chameleon Wore Chartreuse (Chet Gecko Mysteries), by Bruce
Hale. Perfection Learning, 2001.
Chasing Vermeer, by Blue Balliett. Scholastic Paperbacks,
2005.
The Doll in the Garden: A Ghost Story, by Mary Downing Hahn.
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2007.
From the Mixed-up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler, by E. L.
Konigsburg. Atheneum Books for Young Readers, 2007.
Hundred-Year-Old Secret (The Sherlock Files), by Tracy Barrett.
Square Fish, 2010.
Last Shot: A Final Four Mystery, by John Feinstein. Yearling,
2006.
Liar & Spy, by Rebecca Stead. Wendy Lamb Books, 2012.
Max Finder Mystery: Collected Casebook, Volume 1, by Liam
O’Donnell. Owlkids Books, 2010.
Room One: A Mystery or Two, by Andrew Clements. Atheneum Books for
Young Readers, 2008.
Nonfiction (6) Case Closed? Nine Mysteries Unlocked by Modern
Science, by Susan Hughes. Kids Can Press, 2010.
Crime Busting and Detection (Science Solves It!), by Helene
Boudreau. Crabtree Publishing, 2008.
Secret Agent Y.O.U.: The Official Guide to Secret Codes, Disguises,
Surveillance, and More, by Helaine Becker. Owlkids Books,
2006.
You Write It: Mystery, by John Hamilton. ABDO & Daughters,
2009.
Nonprint Hoot, by Carl Hiaasen, directed by Wil Shriner. New Line
Home Video, 2006. (DVD feature film)
Websites MysteryNet’s “Kids Mysteries,”
http://kids.mysterynet.com.
Scholastic’s “Writing with Writers” Mystery page,
http://teacher.scholastic.com/writewit/mystery/ publish.asp
Conclusion
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Now it is time to focus on developing ideas for your original
mystery story.
I. Visit the following site. The site is addressed to teachers, but
it is easy to follow if you pretend it is written to you instead!
www.fictionteachers.com/fictionclass/mystery.html.
A. Work through steps 1–6 on the site, making notes by each number
below. You may choose other settings, details to describe, core
mysteries, etc., but use the steps to guide your thoughts.
1.
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B. Go back through your notes above and underline the ideas you
like best to use in your story.
II. Based on your ideas so far, develop your story further by
mapping it out using the four graphic organizers at
www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/interactives/storymap. You
will need to sign in with a title (“Mystery” is fine) and your name
(first name only). Click on each organizer in turn. Complete it and
print it.
III. Prepare a plot outline of your story.
A. Visit these sites to review proper outline format:
http://mathandreadinghelp.org/
elementary_homework_how_to_write_an_outline.html.
B. Print two copies of the Outline form (last two pages of this
document). Complete one as a draft, following these
instructions:
1. Write your name at the top of both copies.
2. Title: Write the working title of your story.
3. “Main Topic I” is “The Beginning” of your story.
4. “Main Topic II” is “The Middle.”
5. “Main Topic III” is “The Conclusion.”
6. Under each main Roman numeral, list key plot points in A, B, and
C, and details about each on the numbered lines.
IV. By now, you should have a good idea of how your story unfolds.
Using your graphic organizers and outline, write a three- to
four-paragraph summary of the story, introducing the characters,
setting, and tone as well as summarizing the plot.
Print your completed Part 2 research guide and the Peer Editing
Sheet. Return to the Main Webquest. Continue your task with process
step 7.
Name:
A. Read the interview with Van Draanen at
www.rif.org/kids/readingplanet/bookzone/ van_draanen.htm.
1. Where does Van Draanen live?
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II. The Subgenre: “Kid Detective” Stories (a subset of amateur
detective stories)
A. Visit
http://voices.yahoo.com/top-seven-mystery-novel-sub-genres-216486.html?cat=4.
Read the description of amateur detective mysteries. Then visit
www.nytimes.
com/2012/05/13/books/review/the-newest-crop-of-sleuths-for-kids.html?_r=1&
and read the first paragraph. Finally, read the short article “Kid
Detective” at http://
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/KidDetective.
Wendelin Van Draanen, Kid Detective Stories
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III. Activity: Crack the Code
A. Visit www.randomhouse.com/kids/vandraanen/sammykeyes/code.html.
Open http:// en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sammy_Keyes in another
window.
1. Using the Wikipedia entry and your prior knowledge, crack the
code and key in each secret word. When you get it right, that
left-hand bar will turn green and read “Unlocked.”
2. You do not need to download the story, but show your teacher the
page with the bars unlocked when you complete the exercise.
3. Print out the Mystery Elements Writing Guide to refer to as you
develop your story ideas. Take it with you to your group
sessions.
Print your completed guide on Wendelin Van Draanen and return to
the Main Webquest. Continue your task with process step 5.
Name:
A. Read the entry on Berlin at
www.encyclopedia.com/doc/1G2-2179500013.html, through
“Sidelights.”
1. Where does Berlin live?
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A. Read Berlin’s “Author Guest Post” comments, describing his ideas
about puzzle mysteries, at
http://eatingyabooks-bookbattle.blogspot.com/2011/11/20112012-
feature-book-of-week-9-potato.html and the entry for “Puzzle-Based”
at www.yalsa.
ala.org/thehub/2012/02/24/a-mystery-for-every-reader.
Eric Berlin, Puzzle-Based Mysteries
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III. Activity: Solve a Puzzle
A. Visit www.winstonbreen.com/download_puzzle.html. Answer the
question about how you got a copy of The Puzzling World of Winston
Breen, and click on “Download the puzzle set.”
1. Using a copy of the book, find a puzzle you would like to solve.
Print just the page from the website that contains that puzzle, and
solve it.
2. Turn in the solved puzzle with your other paperwork at the end
of the webquest.
3. Print out the Mystery Elements Writing Guide to refer to as you
develop your story ideas. Take it with you to your group
sessions.
Print your completed guide on Eric Berlin and return to the Main
Webquest. Continue your task with process step 5.
Name:
A. Read the short biography of Butler at
http://www.amazon.com/Dori-Hillestad-
Butler/e/B001HMMEHM?rh=n%3A283155%2Cp_82%3AB001HMMEHM%2Cp_n_
feature_browse-bin%3A2656020011.
1. Where does Butler live?
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B. Visit
www.amazon.com/The-Buddy-Files-Case-Lost/dp/0807509329.
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A. Read the paragraph about detective animals at
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki. php/Main/DetectiveAnimal and the
furry sleuth entry at www.cuebon.com/ewriters/
Msubgenres.html.
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A. Visit
www.mcbookwords.com/authorvisits/butler/buddy-files-teaching-guide-
april-20101.pdf. Scroll down to the last page.
1. Click on Buddy’s e-mail address and send him a message. Tell him
a little about this webquest and the furry sleuth mystery story you
are planning.
2. Copy and print your e-mail message to turn in with your other
paperwork.
3. Print out the Mystery Elements Writing Guide to refer to as you
develop your story ideas. Take it with you to your group
sessions.
Print your completed guide on Dori Hillestad Butler and return to
the Main Webquest. Continue your task with process step 5.
Name:
A. Read the short biography of Hiaasen at
www.randomhouse.com/kids/hiaasen/ author.php and the first four
questions and answers at www.carlhiaasen.com/
faq/faq-hoot.shtml.
1. Where does Hiaasen live?
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B. Visit
www.randomhousekids.com/authors-illustrators/detail/79#.UZzfW4go5Hg
and
http://thebestnotes.com/booknotes/Hoot/Hoot_Book_Summary_Notes04.html
(scroll down to the “Honors and Awards” section).
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A. Read the paragraph about ecological mysteries at
http://bloomingtonecocriticism.
blogspot.com/2009/02/interesting-genre-eco-mystery-where.html and
the paragraph “What Is an Eco-Mystery?” at
www.esiponline.org/classroom/foundations/writing/
ecomysteries.html.
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A. Visit
http://sheppardsoftware.com/content/animals/kidscorner/endangered_animals/
endangered_game.htm.
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3. Print out the Mystery Elements Writing Guide to refer to as you
develop your story ideas. Take it with you to your group
sessions.
Print your completed guide on Carl Hiaasen and return to the Main
Webquest. Continue your task with process step 5.
Author’s name:
Peer editor’s name: Date:
It’s time for you to play detective with your partner’s story. Read
the story through once, checking off the mystery elements on the
left as you go. Then read the story a second time and record the
evidence (examples) of these elements on the right. Once you are
done, brainstorm with your partner to figure out how he or she
could make the story better.
Adapted from the WRITING RUBRIC
(http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson327/rubric.pdf)
from the ReadWriteThink lesson “Thundering Tall Tales: Using
Read-Aloud as a Springboard to Writing”
(http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=327).
Copyright 2005 IRA/NCTE. All rights reserved. ReadWriteThink
materials may be reproduced for educational purposes.
Mystery Elements
Place a check in the box next to each characteristic as you locate
it
Evidence
CHARACTERS: Detective(s) Witness(es) Suspect(s)
List the characters in the story and what their roles are:
SETTING: Where the story takes place
List the ways the writer describes the setting(s):
PLOT: Action that keeps the reader searching to solve the
mystery
Explain what is happening / the mystery that you are trying to
solve:
CLUES: Hints that help the reader and detective solve the
mystery
Identify the clues given in the story:
DISTRACTIONS: Clues that throw the reader off of the trail
Name any clues that threw you off the trail:
CONCLUSION: The solution to the mystery
Summarize the ending:
Author’s name:
Peer editor’s name: Date:
It’s time for you to play detective with your partner’s story. Read
the story through once, checking off the mystery elements on the
left as you go. Then read the story a second time and record the
evidence (examples) of these elements on the right. Once you are
done, brainstorm with your partner to figure out how he or she
could make the story better.
Adapted from the WRITING RUBRIC
(http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson327/rubric.pdf)
from the ReadWriteThink lesson “Thundering Tall Tales: Using
Read-Aloud as a Springboard to Writing”
(http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=327).
Copyright 2005 IRA/NCTE. All rights reserved. ReadWriteThink
materials may be reproduced for educational purposes.
Mystery Elements
Place a check in the box next to each characteristic as you locate
it
Evidence
CHARACTERS: Detective(s) Witness(es) Suspect(s)
List the characters in the story and what their roles are:
SETTING: Where the story takes place
List the ways the writer describes the setting(s):
PLOT: Action that keeps the reader searching to solve the
mystery
Explain what is happening / the mystery that you are trying to
solve:
CLUES: Hints that help the reader and detective solve the
mystery
Identify the clues given in the story:
DISTRACTIONS: Clues that throw the reader off of the trail
Name any clues that threw you off the trail:
CONCLUSION: The solution to the mystery
Summarize the ending:
Return to your chosen author: Wendelin Van Draanen, Eric Berlin,
Dori Hillestad Butler, or
Carl Hiaasen or return to the Main Webquest.
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MYSTERY ELEMENTS WRITING GUIDE
Copyright 2005 IRA/NCTE. All rights reserved. ReadWriteThink
materials may be reproduced for educational purposes.
The following questions will help you fill in your MYSTERY GRAPHIC
ORGANIZER.
Characters
Setting
Plot
Clues
Distractions
Structure
• Who will the characters be? Who are the suspects? Who is trying
to solve the mystery?
• What do the characters look like?
• What do the characters do? What are their motives?
• Who has an alibi? Who doesn’t?
• Where will the mystery take place?
• What is the problem, crime, or puzzle of the mystery? Where will
it be introduced?
• What evidence will the investigator discover?
• How is the mystery solved?
• What are the clues to help the sleuth and reader solve the
mystery?
• For each event, is there a clue?
• Do the clues help the reader predict the solution?
• What things will lead the investigator off the path?
• Do we learn about the mystery in the introduction? What
characters do we meet here?
• What happens in the middle of the story? What clues are shared
with the reader and the investigator?
• Does the conclusion reveal the answer to the mystery?
Mystery Elements Writing Guide
Return to your chosen author: Wendelin Van Draanen, Eric Berlin,
Dori Hillestad Butler, or
Carl Hiaasen or return to the Main Webquest.
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Outline Name:
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Continue with Part 2 or return to your chosen author: Wendelin Van
Draanen, Eric Berlin, Dori Hillestad Butler, or Carl Hiaasen or
return to the Main Webquest.
Part 2 No: