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Briefing Session on 2016 HKDSE
Visual Arts Public Examination
Nov 2016
Programme
• Briefing on assessment requirements, marking criteria and
general performance on Paper 1
• Briefing on assessment requirements, marking criteria and
general performance on Paper 2
• Report on Pilot study on the relaxation of the linkage
between art/design appreciation and criticism and art/design
making
• Q & A
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PAPER 1
VISUAL PRESENTATION OF A THEME
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Briefing on assessment requirements, marking criteria
and general performance of Candidates on Paper 1
Assessment requirements
Part A (20 marks)
With regard to the artwork provided, candidates are assessed on
whether they can provide:
1. precise detail in description
2. a reasonable depth of analysis
3. an in-depth interpretation and evaluation from varied perspectives
4
The mark allocation of Part A
5
Part B (80 marks)
Candidates are assessed on their ability to demonstrate the relationship between art criticism and appreciation, and their personal art work.
Create a piece of two-dimensional artwork using any media, form, style and technique to present a theme in response to the critical appreciation in Part A in the white cartridge paper provided. Write an artwork statement of about 50 words to explain how your work is related to your art appreciation. This section carries 80 marks.
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General Marking Criteria
With reference to the application of the visual element, the
articulation of art media, the technique, the visual effect and
visual communication; evaluate the candidates’ ability to:
1. present the theme in a personal and creative way
2. select means of visual self-expression and determine the
most appropriate method of communicating an idea, a
thought, a feeling, a sentiment, etc.
3. demonstrate competence in dealing with visual elements
4. select and apply appropriate medium, techniques and
processes in the execution and production of a painting.
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The mark allocation of Part B
8
Note:
Candidates are required to write an artwork statement which
serves to elaborate on the relationship between art criticism
and appreciation, and art making. This will be taken into
consideration when assessing the practical work.
The marking rubrics of Part A and Part B
(see appendix)
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare the forms and expressions of
Plate (1a) and Plate (1b); interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Paper One, Question 1
Plate (1a) Li Wei Han (李慧嫻). Yuanyang Café (鴛鴦冰室). 2009-2012. Stoneware and mixed media,
variable dimensions..
Plate (1b) Alberto Giacometti. Piazza. 1947-1949.
Bronze, 21 x 62.5 x 42.8 cm.
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison Li Wei Han’s
Yuanyang Café
Alberto Giacometti’s
Piazza
Commonalities
• sculpture of a group of human figures
• human figures are not in life-size
• human figures are raw and in simplified form
• use human postures and gestures to present emotions
Differences
fried stoneware
realistic figures setting in a
café
the figures are obese,
weighty and with clear
facial expressions
the activities of the figures
included eating, reading
and chatting etc.
interactive figures are
evoked a strong sense of
liveliness
cast-bronze
imaginary setting of a plaza
the figures are elongated, thin
and with vague facial expressions
four figures are walking with their
spreading hands, the other is
standing with hands pressing
against the body
figures are striding towards
different directions while a figure
is standing. They do not know
each other, evoking a strong
sense of alienation 12
2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• idea and the theme
• characteristics of the two media
• different approaches of art-making
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Create a piece of two-dimensional work based on the theme
“A Group of Dancers on the Stage”.
(80 marks)
1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 1, Question 1)
• 35% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was good in general.
• Most candidates used spotlights and red curtain to convey
the atmosphere of a stage.
• Some candidates provided elaborated scenery to deliver an
abundant and appealing content with great significance.
• Few candidates made reference to Plate (1b) figures which
expressed the theme directly, resulting in flat and tedious
works.
• Few candidates left out the element of ‘a group of’ dancers
and just painted a dancer without further interpretation.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare the forms and expressions of Plate (2a) and Plate (2b); interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Paper One, Question 2
Plate (2a) Liu Kuo-sung (劉國松). Snow
Moving According to Qianshan (千山). 2008.
Ink and colour on paper, 85.7 x 91.8 cm.
Plate (2b) Tara Donovan. Untitled (Plastic Cup). 2006.
Plastic cup, variable dimensions.
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
17
Comparison
Liu Kuo-sung’s
Snow Moving According to
Qianshan
Tara Donovan’s
Untitled (Plastic Cup)
Commonalities landscape as subject matter
Differences
New Chinese Ink painting
ink and paper
use of ink techniques, the
handling of emptiness and
solidity, contrasting of positive
and negative spaces to create
a landscape of expansive
mountains and snow scenery
use of great tonal contrast to
depict a state amalgamated
with stillness and activeness in
the picture. Use of heavy dark
ink to depict the high
mountains and lofty peaks and
use of emptiness to show the
heavy and thick snow. Use of
the value contrasts between
adjacent lines and patches to
depict the fluidity of the ice on
the mountains
contemporary three-dimensional
installation
white disposable plastic cups and the
lighting effects
an installation formed by a
rectangular phalanx of a great
quantity of stacked plastic cups. The
stacks have different heights forming
a pixelated structure with the
appearance of a landscape
the spot lights produce contrasts of
light and shade on the installation.
The light effect aids to create a still
installation with (the appearance of)
expansive mountain stretches
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• idea and the theme
• characteristics of the two media
• different approaches of art-making
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Create a piece of two-dimensional work based on the theme “An Abandoned Village”.
(80 marks)
1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 1, Question 2)
• 19% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was satisfactory in general.
• Most of the candidates used a realistic style to express their
response to the theme.
• Some candidates used destroyed buildings to express the
feeling of ‘abandoned’ directly.
• A small number of candidates left out the element of an
abandoned village without contextualization.
• In contrast, a number of candidates did not understand that
the required theme was the scene of a ‘village’, resulting in
misinterpretation.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare the forms and expressions of
Plate (3a) and Plate (3b); interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Paper One, Question 3
Plate(3a) James Allen. Skulduggery ( 75 Years
of DC Comics: The Art of Modern Mythmaking).
2012. Book excavation, 79 x 58 x 9 cm.
Plate (3b) Sahibdin. The Awakening of Kumbhakarana.
1653. Opaque watercolour on paper,
23 x 39 cm.
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison James Allen’s
Skulduggery
Sahibdin’s
The Awakening of Kumbhakarana
Commonalities Narrative artworks
Differences
book carving
comics
narrated the stories through
strips
reveals part of pages to show
the contents and orders of
different stories
plot-driven
water colour on paper
myth
narrated the myth in one picture
depicts detail of the content,
characters, actions and costumes
character-driven
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• idea and the theme
• characteristics of the two media
• different approaches of art-making
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Create a piece of two-dimensional work based on the theme “The Sorrow of a Hero”.
(80 marks)
1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 1, Question 3)
• 21% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was satisfactory in general.
• Most candidates portrayed ‘Superman’ as expressing the
meaning of ‘hero’ directly.
• Some candidates only attended to the superficial meaning of
‘sorrow’, without subtlety or imagination.
• Some candidates creatively constructed the sense of ‘sorrow’
and expressed the theme lively and effectively.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare the forms and expressions of Plate (4a) and Plate (4b); interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Paper One, Question 4
Plate (4a) Kim Tschang-yeul (金昌烈). Water Drops.
1981. Oil and ink on canvas, 182 x 230 cm. Plate (4b) Victor Vasarely. Vega 200. 1968.
Acrylic on canvas, 200 x 200 cm.
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison
Kim Tschang-yeul’s
Water Drops
Victor Vasarely’s
Vega 200
Commonalities
painting
paintings are composited of patterns of different shapes in variable sizes
create three-dimensional effect on a picture plane
Differences
natural water droplets as the subject
matter
use the neat and tight patterning of
water droplets and their reflections
to create a sense of reality
use of natural colours
the rich, vital and translucent water
droplets are sparkling as if they are
formed naturally on the plate
use of long shades of the water
drops to strengthen their three-
dimensional effects
squares, circular and oval patterns
as elements
arrangement of geometric shapes
to create a chessboard pattern with
a three-dimensional optical illusion
use of primary light colours in red,
blue and green
use of tonal contrasts, i.e. darker at
the centre and gradually lighter
towards the edges, to strengthen
the optical illusion
the geometric shapes stretching
across the picture plane forming an
illusion of a three-dimensional
sphere in the middle
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• idea and the theme
• characteristics of the two media
• different approaches of art-making
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Create a piece of two-dimensional work based on the theme “Positive and Negative Spaces”.
(80 marks)
1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 1, Question 4)
• 6% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was fair in general.
• Some of the candidates painted in an abstract style, using
geometric forms to express the feeling of ‘positive and
negative spaces’. These candidates demonstrated a limited
expression of composition and perspective.
• Some candidates depicted a negative feeling by transforming
images of themselves into the theme, resulting in
misinterpretation.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare the forms and expressions of
Plate (5a) and Plate (5b); interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Paper One, Question 5
Plate (5a) Gustave Courbet. Still Life with
Apples and a Pomegranate. 1871. Oil on canvas,
44.5 x 61 cm.
Plate (5b) Louise Moillon. Still Life with a Bowl of
Curacao Oranges. 1634. Oil on panel,
46 x 64 cm.
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
35
Comparison
Gustave Courbet’s
Still Life with Apples and a
Pomegranate
Louise Moillon’s
Still Life with a Bowl of Curacao
Oranges
Commonalities
still life painting
fruits and fruit plate as subject matter
use of dark background to the foreground the objects
Differences
overall tone is darker, tonal
contrast between background
and foreground is smaller
only foreground and
background are shown
depicts rotten apples and a
Pomegranate
there is a water jug and a glass
on the table
coarse pottery fruit plate
brush strokes are spontaneous
overall tone is brighter, tonal
contrast between background
and foreground is greater
the front edge of the table can
be seen. A clear composition of
foreground, middle ground and
background
depicts fresh Curacao oranges
there is no other thing on the
table
fine porcelain fruit plate
brush strokes are delicate
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• idea and the theme
• characteristics of the two media
• different approaches of art-making
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Create a piece of two-dimensional artwork based on the theme “Dining Table after a Feast”.
(80 marks)
1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 1, Question 5)
• 19% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was fair in general.
• Most candidates portrayed cutlery and food on the dining
table as expressing the meaning of ‘after a feast’ directly.
• Most candidates used a realistic style to express their
response to the theme.
• Some candidates demonstrated imagination by transforming
the scenes behind the feast.
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Overall performance in Paper 1
• Candidates were familiar with the written presentation on critical
appreciation of artwork and fluently expressed their viewpoints.
• Most candidates were able to seek out a variety of relevant foci in
literal description. In general, candidates were able to provide
interpretations of meaning towards forms of expression from
different perspectives, with some providing multiple interpretations
of meaning and recognition of embedded messages in the artwork
of a particular context.
• Some candidates were able to connect different experiences and
feelings with the visual forms, without knowing the relationship
among forms.
• However, some candidates only responded to one or two criteria
related to the value judgement of the artwork without judging the
appropriateness of the presentation.
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• The paper provided possibilities for interpretation in terms of
content, composition and colour etc.
• Most candidates demonstrated that they had mastered the
materials, skills and visual elements appropriately in
delivering the key messages of the theme.
• Most of the candidates’ work showed that they were able to
refer the forms and ideas of the appreciation and criticism of
artwork when presenting the theme.
• The best scripts demonstrated candidates’ consideration of
different elements to express a deeper and thoughtful
message related to the theme.
Overall performance in Paper 1
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• However, a number of candidates rushed into the theme
without having fully understood the requirements of the
question and produced superficial work.
• It is recommended that candidates read the instructions of
the question carefully.
• Different levels of performance were seen in interpreting
and presenting ideas in the five questions provided.
Overall performance in Paper 1
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PAPER 2
DESIGN
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Briefing on assessment requirements, marking
criteria and general performance of Candidates on
Paper 2
Assessment requirements
Part A (20 marks)
With regard to the artwork provided, candidates are assessed on
whether they can provide:
1. Precise detail in description
2. A reasonable depth of analysis
3. An in-depth interpretation and evaluation from varied perspectives
44
The mark allocation of Part A
45
Part B (80 marks)
Candidates are assessed on their ability to demonstrate the relationship between art criticism and appreciation, and their personal art work.
Create a piece of design using any medium, form, style and technique to present a theme in response to the critical appreciation in Part A in the white cartridge paper provided. Write a design work statement of about 50 words to explain how your work is related to your art appreciation. This section carries 80 marks.
46
General Marking Criteria
With reference to the application of the visual element, the
articulation of art media, the technique, the visual effect and
visual communication; evaluate the candidates’ ability to:
1. present the theme in a personal and creative way
2. select means of visual self-expression and determine the
most appropriate method of communicating an idea, a
thought, a feeling, a sentiment, etc.
3. demonstrate competence in dealing with visual elements
4. select and apply appropriate medium, techniques and
processes in the execution and production of a painting.
47
General marking guidelines: With reference to the application of the visual element, the articulation of art media,
technique, visual effect, idea development and design principles, evaluate the candidates’ ability in the following areas:
1. Solving design problems
The extent to which the candidate successfully proposes feasible solutions for a given problem, and is able to develop design concepts which convey the ideas of a theme.
2. Presenting ideas by using media, material and technique
The extent to which the candidate is able successfully to apply the appropriate media, technique, and visual style to present the solution proposed.
3. Understanding and organization
The extent to which the candidate is able successfully to apply appropriate visual elements such as colour, pattern, texture, shape, form; and design principles such as contrast, rhythm, balance and emphasis.
4. Communication
The extent to which the candidate is able convincingly to convey a theme.
5. Meeting design requirements
The extent to which the candidate is able successfully to create a design that meets specific size, measurement and other requirements of the question;
6. Demonstrating originality
The extent to which the candidate is able to successfully convey design ideas which are original and creative.
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The mark allocation of Part B
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Note:
Candidates are required to write an artwork statement which
serves to elaborate on the relationship between art criticism
and appreciation, and art making. This will be taken into
consideration when assessing the practical work.
The marking rubrics of Part A and Part B
(see appendix)
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare Plate (1a) and Plate (1b) with respect to the design concepts, visual effects and communication effects of the two designs; interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Plate (1a) PHILIPS Printed Advertisement Plate (1b) Duncan Bancroft and Simon Dilks.
BRUCCIANI Family Craft Bakers & Café Printed
Advertisement. 2012.
Paper Two, Question 1
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
52
Comparison PHILIPS Printed Advertisement BRUCCIANAI Family Craft Bakers &
Café Printed Advertisement
Commonalities
commercial printed advertisement
using a cup/ mug filling with beverages as subject matter
top view photographic design
symmetrical composition
warm colour tone
ripples on the drinks’ surface
San serif typeface
text is smaller than the image
Differences
Image: hands holding the
mug which the handle is
pointing at the top. A
speaker’s front view appears
inside the mug; and the
product shot is showed on the
lower left
Typography: solid coloured
letters
Meaning: consumers can
enjoy the selected music by
using the product
Image: a coffee cup is placed on a
saucer and the handle of the cup is
oblique to the right. A sign of Wi-Fi
service appears inside the cup
Typography: reversed white
letters
Meaning: the restaurant provides
free Wi-Fi service to the customers
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• The usage of colour, shape and symbols, and composition of the designs
• The relation between graphic and color selection and the designs’ nature and image
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Design a poster for a western fast food restaurant named
“Space Castle” (太空城堡) to promote a special offer: Get a
glass of free orange juice for every $200 you spend.
The design should include:
The name of the restaurant (in Chinese, English or both
Chinese and English)
The measurements of the poster should be 40cm x 40cm
( 80 marks)
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1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 2, Question 1)
• 53% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was good in general.
• The best scripts showed good illustration skills.
• Some candidates demonstrated maturity in concept and
artful execution of their designs in dealing with the poster
design with the images of space.
• However, some candidates made reference to Plates (1a)
and (1b) composition directly, resulting in a superficial design.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare Plate (2a) and Plate (2b) with
respect to the design concepts, visual effects and
communication effects of the two designs; interpret and
evaluate these works. (20 marks)
Plate (2a) Hani Douaji. Trident Gum
Packaging Series. Plate (2b) Wella Hair-Dye Product Printed Advertisement
Series. 2009.
Paper Two, Question 2
58
There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
59
Comparison Hani Douaji’s Trident Gum
Packaging Series
Wella Hair-Dye Product
Printed Advertisement Series
Commonalities commercial design
a series of designs
Differences
Image: graphic design (different
people’s mouths)
Typography: Sans Serif typeface
Colour: black, red and pastel
yellow and green colour
Meaning: the product is suitable
for both men and women which
could bring oral health and get rid
of bad breath
Format: packaging design
Image: photographic image (the end
of the woman’ hair is connected with a
paint brush)
Typography: Serif font typeface and
script
Color: warm colour tone
Meaning: the product can provide a
beautiful hair dyed colour
Format: printed advertisement
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• The usage of colour, shape and symbols, and composition of the designs
• The relation between graphic and colour selection and organization’s nature and image
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Design the front views of the packaging (Plate 2c) for a series of
four shampoo samples targeting at young people for a hair beauty
product company named “Cool Infinity” (型無限). The names of the
four shampoo samples are:
• Vibrant (勁力)
• Romance (浪漫)
• Pure (清純)
• Glamorous (艷麗)
The design should include:
• The names of the company and shampoo sample (in Chinese,
English or both Chinese and English)
The measurements of each design should be ENLARGED to
12 cm x 18 cm (in horizontal or vertical orientation).
(80 marks)
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1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation & Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
63
General performance of candidates
(Paper 2, Question 2)
• 22% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was good in general.
• Most candidates showed their understanding of the
packaging product in the design.
• Most candidates demonstrated the basic mastery of lines,
colors and images, and delivered the features of the product
clearly.
• A small number of candidates did not focus on the product of
the design – shampoo and designed the graphics without
relating to its purpose.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare Plate (3a) and Plate (3b) with respect to the design concepts, structures, visual effects and communication effects of the two designs; interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Plate (3a) Seulbi Kim. TOGO BURGER. 2013. Paper. Plate (3b) Yena Lee (李英娜). Butterfly Tea. 2013.
Paper Two, Question 3
65
There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison Seulbi Kim’s TOGO BURGER Yena Lee’s Butterfly Tea
Commonalities packaging design for food
paper
Differences
Structure: folding design with
hand-carry function
Colour: black, yellow and light
brown
Meaning: simple design can
reduce the cost of material and
time for packing take-away
food
Structure: pocket/ sachet
design
Colour: yellow and black
Meaning: butterfly as
decoration can create a
relaxing atmosphere
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• The usage of colour, shape, materials and structure of the designs
• The relation between materials and structure selection and product’s nature
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Design a packaging for a western-style afternoon tea set named “Four
Biscuits Two Teas” (四餅二茶). The packaging should include four
pieces of biscuits and two tea bags. Dimensions of the biscuit and tea
bag are shown in Plate (3c.1) and Plate (3c.2) respectively. The
packaging will be placed inside a vending machine (Plate (3d)) for sale.
The dimensions for the packaging should NOT EXCEED 7cm (L) x 7cm
(W) x 14cm (H).
The design should include:
• The name of the product (in Chinese, English or both Chinese and English)
• TWO 3-dimensional renderings. The placing of the four biscuits and two tea
bags should be shown in one of these 3-dimensional renderings
• An indication of the measurements and materials used for the design
(80 marks)
Plate (3c.2) A Tea Bag
4 cm (L) x 1.5 cm (W) x 6 cm
(H)
Plate (3c.1) A Piece of Biscuit
6 cm (diameter) x 0.5 cm
(thickness)
Plate (3d) Vending Machine
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1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation & Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 2, Question 3)
• 12% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was good in general.
• Most candidates’ designs tended to be in the form of a cubic
box.
• Some candidates exhibited good illustration skills in
presenting the design effectively.
• A small number of candidates showed a lack of
understanding of the feature of the packaging, resulting in a
failure to deliver the promotion of the goods.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare Plate (4a) and Plate (4b) with respect
to the design concepts, structures, visual effects and communication
effects of the two designs; interpret and evaluate these works.
(20 marks)
Plate (4a) Mark Stoddart. Hippo Coffee Table. 2002.
Bronze and glass, 58 x 153 x 91cm. Plate (4b) Ototo. Nessie. Plastics, 24.5 x 8 x 9 cm.
Paper Two, Question 4
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison Mark Stoddart’s Hippo Coffee
Table Ototo’s Nessie
Commonalities
home ware
three-dimensional design
present the activities of the creature in the water
Differences
Image: realistic hippo
Colour: silver grey
Materials: bronze and glass
Meaning: a sculpture of hippo
and a glass plate create a
decorative furniture
Image: simplified lake monster
Colour: turquoise
Materials: plastic
Meaning: fun for eating/
cooking
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• The usage of colour, shape and symbols, and composition of the designs
• The relation between graphic and colour selection and organization’s nature and image
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Design a set of kitchenware based on the theme “Forest”.
The design should include:
• A kettle, a cooking pan and a heat-resistant glove
EACH kitchenware design item should have TWO 3-dimensional
renderings with an indication of the measurements and
materials used.
(80 marks)
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1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 2, Question 4)
• 8% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was good in general.
• Some candidates used images of animals to echo the idea of
‘forest’.
• Designs with good illustration skills showed a comprehensive
consideration and reflection in the idea development.
• A small number of candidates made reference to Plate (4b)’s
pot as kettle directly, resulting in misinterpretation.
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(A) Describe, analyse and compare Plate (5a) and Plate (5b) with
respect to the design concepts, structures, visual effects and
communication effects of the two designs; interpret and evaluate
these works. (20 marks)
Plate (5a) Moschino Menswear.
2016.
Plate (5b) Shanghai Tang (上海灘) Imperial
Collection, Clutch Bag. Sequins, beads, cloth, plastic
and metal, 9 x 16.5 x 6 cm.
Paper Two, Question 5
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There are no model answers for questions requiring comparison
and contrast, analysis, and interpretation. Responses were
judged on the basis of viewpoints provided and communication
of:
1. Literal Description
Precise detail in description
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Comparison Moschino Menswear Shanghai Tang
Imperial Collection, Clutch Bag
Commonalities fashion products
emphasis on decoration
Differences
Sales targets: man
Silhouette: long sleeve shirt,
vest, bow tie and capri pants
are referenced to western
classical gentleman cloths
Image: flower, stripe and
cartoon character
Colour: mainly pastel colour
with black line
Materials: cloth
Meaning: combination of
different styles (formal, causal
and cartoon) create a sense of
humour/ playfulness
Sales targets: woman
Form: oval box
Image: Chinese style cloud-
like pattern
Colour: gold, silver and white
Materials: sequins, beads,
cloth, plastic and metal
Meaning: present a feel of
traditional Chinese premier
and auspicious
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2. Formal Analysis
A reasonable depth of analysis on the aspects of
• The inter-relationships among the various visual characteristics
• Differences in function
• The relation between materials and structure selection and product’s nature
• Relation between the product and user
3. Interpretation of Meaning
An in-depth interpretation from varied perspectives
4. Value Judgment
An in-depth evaluation from varied perspectives
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(B) Design a set of outfits for a man based on the theme
“Humorous Asian Gentleman”.
The design should include:
• A jacket, a pair of shorts, a pair of shoes and a briefcase
EACH design item should have TWO 3-dimensional
renderings with an indication of the measurements and
materials used.
(80 marks)
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1. Selection and Use of Materials & Techniques
2. Selection and Use of Visual Elements and Principles of
Design
3. Relationship between Practical Work and Appreciation &
Criticism of the Artwork
4. Creativity & Imagination
5. Communication of the Theme
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General performance of candidates
(Paper 2, Question 5)
• 4% of the candidates attempted this question.
• The performance was very good in general.
• Most candidates used marker pen as the drawing medium.
• Some candidates demonstrated good illustration skills in
presenting the design in an interesting and effective display.
• A small number of candidates did not focus on the meaning
of ‘humorous’ and design the outfit without relating to its
theme.
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• Most candidates were familiar with the written presentation on
what they saw and felt when analysing the design work.
• They were able to seek out many relevant foci in literal
description. Most candidates were able to develop a linear
recognition of visual forms in the design work.
• In general, candidates were able to connect different
experiences and feelings with the visual forms, providing
multiple interpretations of meaning towards the form of
presentation.
• However, many candidates only responded to one or two
criteria related to the value judgment of the designated
artwork without judging the appropriateness of the
presentation.
Overall performance in Paper 2
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• The themes for the design questions set were based on candidates’
everyday experience and there were many outstanding designs.
• Most candidates were able to master the materials and skills
appropriately in delivering the key messages of the theme. They
were able to express the key messages of the design by visual
elements and principles of design.
• Some candidates demonstrated personality characteristics with
originality and by means of transference or association.
• Some designs displayed the hidden meaning of the theme and
reflected a high quality of understanding of the design.
• A small number of candidates presented high design execution
competence by using appropriate styles and media in the finished
piece.
Overall performance in Paper 2
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• In general, candidates used relevant and coordinated forms of
artistic creation in different ideas, especially in fashion designs.
• However, some candidates answered the questions without
having fully understood the requirements and produced
superficial work.
• Candidates should read carefully the instructions of the
question in order to try to understand the purpose of the
design, the target audience, the main features and the design
description.
Overall performance in Paper 2
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Pilot study on
the relaxation of the linkage between art/design
appreciation and criticism and art/design making
Background
• Subsequent to the New Academic Structure (NAS) review, the
linkage between art/design appreciation and criticism and
art/design making in Papers 1 and 2 of Visual Arts exam will
be relaxed starting from the 2018 HKDSE.
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New Academic Structure Review and Beyond
Medium-term Review: Last Batch Recommendations (Part 2)
(Nov 2015)
Corresponding changes in tandem with relaxing the linkage in the
Public Examination (at S4 in 2015/16; effective from 2018 HKDSE):
• Delete the artwork/design work statement for explaining the
relationship between the practical work and the appreciation of
artwork
• If necessary, candidates may submit a creative/design brief
which may include notes, sketches or layouts produced during
the examination to support their artwork/design work
• The criterion ‘Relationship between Practical Artwork and
Appreciation & Criticism’ will be deleted from the current
marking criteria for Part B of both exam papers. The other four
criteria will remain unchanged, carrying a total of 80 marks (i.e.
a max of 20 marks allocated to each criterion)
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Changes in the Cartridge Paper
• No artwork statement
is required
• The size of the
cartridge paper
provided in the exam
will be changed to
A2
A2 (420 mm x 594 mm)
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Mark Allocation of 5 Marking Criteria (2012-2017)
High Middle Low Not Shown
14-16 11-13 8-10 5-7 1-4 0
Selection and Use of
Materials &
Technique
Able to select and master
the materials and the
skills accurately and
effectively in
implementing the key
message of the theme
Able to master the
materials and the skills
appropriately and
effectively in
outstanding the key
message of the theme
Able to master the
materials and the skills
appropriately in
delivering the key
message of the theme
Able to use the materials
and the skills relevant to
the theme
Unable to use the
materials and the
skills to cope with
the theme
Selection and Use of
Visual Elements and
Principles of Design
Able to select and master
multiple visual elements
and principles of design,
accurately and effectively
in implementing the key
message of the theme
Able to master multiple
visual elements and
principles of design
appropriately and
effectively in
outstanding the key
message of the theme
Able to master the visual
elements and principles
of design appropriately in
delivering the key
message of the theme
Able to use the visual
elements and principles
of design relevant to the
theme
Unable to use the
visual elements and
principles of design
to cope with the
theme
Relationship
between Practical
Artwork and
Appreciation &
Criticism
Able to assimilate various
context of artworks or
ideas from the
appreciation & criticism
into the relevant theme,
explore their own way of
painting and looking for
their own painting
language
Able to integrate
various context of
artworks or ideas from
the appreciation &
criticism, and challenge
the problems in
implementing the
theme
Able to introspect
particular form or idea of
the appreciation &
criticism of the artwork by
carrying out reflection &
considerations as filter on
presenting the theme
Able to refer the form or
idea of the appreciation
& criticism of the artwork
to present relevant theme
Unable to refer
appreciation &
criticism of the
Artwork to relevant
presentation
Creativity &
Imagination
Able to demonstrate
personality characteristics
through originality and
unique imagination
Able to demonstrate
personality
characteristics through
originality and rich
imagination
Able to demonstrate
personality
characteristics through
originality and by means
of transference or
association
Able to demonstrate
personality
characteristics or
originality
Unable to show
personality
characteristics or
originality
Communication of
Theme
Able to integrate relevant
forms of artistic creation
in different emotions or
idea
Able to use multiple,
relevant and coordinate
forms of artistic creation
in different emotions or
idea
Able to use relevant and
coordinate forms of
artistic creation in
different emotions or idea
Only use irrelevant forms
of artistic creation in
different emotions or idea
Unable to use any
relevant forms of
artistic creation in
different emotions or
idea 93
Mark Allocation of 4 Marking Criteria
(Effective from 2018 HKDSE)
High Middle Low Not
Shown
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Selection and
Use of Materials
& Technique
Able to select and master the materials and the skills accurately and effectively in implementing the key message of the theme
Able to master the materials and the skills appropriately and effectively in outstanding the key message of the theme
Able to master the materials and the skills appropriately in delivering the key message of the theme
Able to use the materials and the skills relevant to the theme
Unable to use the materials and the skills to cope with the theme
Selection and
Use of Visual
Elements and
Principles of
Design
Able to select and master multiple visual elements and principles of design, accurately and effectively in implementing the key message of the theme
Able to master multiple visual elements and principles of design appropriately and effectively in outstanding the key message of the theme
Able to master the visual elements and principles of design appropriately in delivering the key message of the theme
Able to use the visual elements and principles of design relevant to the theme
Unable to use the visual elements and principles of design to cope with the theme
Creativity &
Imagination
Able to demonstrate personality characteristics through originality and unique imagination
Able to demonstrate personality characteristics through originality and rich imagination
Able to demonstrate personality characteristics through originality and by means of transference or association
Able to demonstrate personality characteristics or originality
Unable to show personality characteristics or originality
Communication
of Theme
Able to integrate relevant forms of artistic creation in different emotions or idea
Able to use multiple, relevant and coordinate forms of artistic creation in different emotions or idea
Able to use relevant and coordinate forms of artistic creation in different emotions or idea
Only use irrelevant forms of artistic creation in different emotions or idea
Unable to use any relevant forms of artistic creation in different emotions or idea
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Changes in Mark Range
• No change in the requirements
of the four marking criteria • Revised mark range for each criterion
(from 3 to 4 marks each)
• The total marks for Part B (Visual Arts
Making/ Design ) remains unchanged as
being 80 marks
i.e., 4 criteria X 20 marks = 80 marks
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Aims of the Pilot Study
To prepare for the above-mentioned change in the marking
criteria, a pilot study has been conducted to:
• try out the updated assessment criteria and
• develop exemplars for standards illustration
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• 10 VA teachers and subject experts were invited to trial mark
the samples in accordance with the revised Part B marking
rubrics
• The background of the teacher members:
‒ With over 10 year’s teaching experience
‒ Most of them are VA panel heads
‒ They teach in EMI or CMI schools
‒ Most of them have Public Exam making experience
‒ They taught students taking Paper 1 and/or Paper 2 in previous
HKDSEs
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Types of Samples Trial Marked
Types Numbe
r
Marked
Using
Sample
Set
2016 HKDSE VA exam
live scripts (S6) 107 5 criteria 1
4 criteria 2
Scripts with no reference to
Part A (S5)
• from 11 schools
• 2 government schools, 9
aided schools
• 1 EMI schools, 10 CMI
schools
• 1 boys school, 1 girls schools,
9 co-ed schools
123 4 criteria 3
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Findings and Observations
• The implementation of 4 criteria in marking was
smooth in general, markers experienced no difficulties
in marking both the S6 and S5 samples;
• No significant difference in marks were awarded to the
S6 samples (set 1 & set 2); i.e., students’
performances are broadly comparable with or without
the need to link Part A with Part B;
• In marking the S5 samples, markers found the layout
and written explanations provided by students in the
creative /design brief informative and useful.
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Samples 1 (Design Brief)
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Design
1 H M L NOT SHOWN
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Media Elements Creativity Theme
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Samples 2 (Creative Brief)
102
6 H M L NOT SHOWN
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Media Elements Creativity Theme
Visual Arts Making
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Samples 3 (Creative Brief)
104
105
7 H M L NOT SHOWN
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Media Elements Creativity Theme
Visual Arts Making
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Samples 4 (Design Brief)
107
8 H M L NOT SHOWN
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Media Elements Creativity Theme
Design
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Samples 5 (Creative Brief)
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10 H M L NOT SHOWN
17-20 13-16 9-12 5-8 1-4 0
Media Elements Creativity Theme
Visual Arts Making
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Date Event Place
27 January 2017
TO
28 February 2017
Exhibition of Artworks
and Scripts of HKDSE
in Visual Arts 2016
Young Achievers’
Gallery,
EDB Kowloon
Tong Education
Services Centre,
19, Suffolk Road,
Kowloon
2017 HKDSE Visual Arts –
Professional Development Programme
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Q & A
112
Thank You
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