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Writing LessonWriting LessonThe Angry Customer
24th August 2011
The Angry Customer
24th August 2011
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Learning IntentionLearning Intention
We are learning to write a
character description ofan angry character.
We are learning to write a
character description ofan ang
ry character.
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Success CriteriaSuccess Criteria
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VCOP
VCOP
We are focusing on V for Vocabulary.We are focusing on V for Vocabulary.
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Ideas TrailIdeas TrailYou have 5 minutes to lists as
many angry words as you canon the Ideas Trail.
I will put you into your groups
for this.
You have 5 minutes to lists as
many angry words as you canon the Ideas Trail.
I will put you into your groups
for this.
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Sharing of Ideas TrailsSharing of Ideas Trails
We will SHARE what we have on
our ideas trails.
Why are we doing this?
We will SHARE what we have on
our ideas trails.
Why are we doing this?
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Body LanguageBody Language
What is angry body language?What is angry body language?
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SpeechSpeechHow does someone who is angry speak?How does someone who is angry speak?
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Facial ExpressionFacial Expression
What does an angry face look like?What does an angry face look like?
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The table toppled over while BertBlack bustled past. He grabbed the parceland burst out his bedroom door. Hethundered down the stairs at such a speedthat he landed flat on his face at thebottom. He saw his reflection in the mirror.
His face was as red as molten lava and steamerupted out of his ears. His only hairs onthe top of his head stood on its ends and hisbushy eyebrows looked like sloping forests.
He bashed the mirror with his parcel. Hiswife appeared in the kitchen doorway. Dear,dear 7 years bad she said until Bertinterrupted her.
The table toppled over while BertBlack bustled past. He grabbed the parceland burst out his bedroom door. Hethundered down the stairs at such a speedthat he landed flat on his face at thebottom. He saw his reflection in the mirror.
His face was as red as molten lava and steamerupted out of his ears. His only hairs onthe top of his head stood on its ends and hisbushy eyebrows looked like sloping forests.
He bashed the mirror with his parcel. Hiswife appeared in the kitchen doorway. Dear,dear 7 years bad she said until Bertinterrupted her.
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BE QUIET! he screamed and withthat he ripped his coat off its hook and left.
Bert slammed the door shut soroughly that the window beside it shattered.He stomped part way along his driveway thenhis Labrador jumped on him. GET OFFSILLY DOG! he shouted. The dog slunkaway whimpering. Bert bared his teeth. Hethumped to the end of his driveway and
ripped the gate off its post in anger.
BE QUIET! he screamed and withthat he ripped his coat off its hook and left.
Bert slammed the door shut soroughly that the window beside it shattered.He stomped part way along his driveway thenhis Labrador jumped on him. GET OFFSILLY DOG! he shouted. The dog slunkaway whimpering. Bert bared his teeth. Hethumped to the end of his driveway and
ripped the gate off its post in anger.
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He burst through the hole where thegate had been and bustled round the cornerto the main street. Bert pushed anyone oranything that was in his way out of his way.He even knocked babies or toddlers flyinginto the crowds. Angry mothers screamed at
him, but none of them were as angry as him.He passed thousands of shops beforehe found the right one. Finally he saw thesign, Suzies Sunny Shop it said. Bert
stepped through the doorway. He stompedover to the checkouts and thrust the parcelinto the owners hand.
He burst through the hole where thegate had been and bustled round the cornerto the main street. Bert pushed anyone oranything that was in his way out of his way.He even knocked babies or toddlers flyinginto the crowds. Angry mothers screamed at
him, but none of them were as angry as him.He passed thousands of shops beforehe found the right one. Finally he saw thesign, Suzies Sunny Shop it said. Bert
stepped through the doorway. He stompedover to the checkouts and thrust the parcelinto the owners hand.
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Planning your storyPlanning your storyParagraph One
Introduce the Character.
Character opens the parcel.
Reader learns what is wrong.
Paragraph One
Introduce the Character.
Character opens the parcel.
Reader learns what is wrong.
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Planning your storyPlanning your storyParagraph Two
Character leaves the house and travels
to the shop.
Describe the setting and events that
happen on the journey.
Paragraph Two
Character leaves the house and travels
to the shop.
Describe the setting and events that
happen on the journey.
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Planning your storyPlanning your storyParagraph Three
Character arrives at the shop.
Describe the setting.
What happens in the shop?
Describe body language, speech andfacial expressions.
Paragraph Three
Character arrives at the shop.
Describe the setting.
What happens in the shop?
Describe body language, speech andfacial expressions.
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Words to HelpWords to Help furious
steam coming out of
his ears shouted
screamed
stamped his feet
his teeth were gritted
shoulders hunched
furious
steam coming out of
his ears shouted
screamed
stamped his feet
his teeth were gritted
shoulders hunched
fists clenched
furrowed brow
angry
red mist
doors slammed
window shattered flung his arms
screeched
fists clenched
furrowed brow
angry
red mist
doors slammed
window shattered flung his arms
screeched