7/26/2019 AC 527 COMMENT

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AMORES, VIANCA PEARL

AC 527, 9:00-10:30, MW

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The researcher needs to be more specific with respect to the sampling procedure.

The study also lacked details to support the use of the methodology applied in this

chapter.

The research did not describe the validity and reliability measures.

The study did not mention the company being studied in the Research Respondents

part.

The researcher should use connecting words to promote unity and coherence in her

study.

The researcher should be more specific on the secondary data used in the study.

The researcher should enumerate all the secondary date used for the research.

The researcher needs to correct the following writing errors:

o The following sentences should be revised to active voice sentences: A mix-method approach...Corporate overnance !corecard."

#This report can...across the region."

#The results of...in the scorecard."

o $hrases should be revised into complete sentences.

#A!%A& Corporate...legislative re'uirements."

o !entences should be parallel.

#This chapter will...will be met."

o !ub(ect-verb disagreement should be corrected.

o #)ith the sub(ect...certain state regulations."

Comment: *urthermore+ there seemed to be inade'uate disclosure on how the studywill support research on A!%A& corporate governance.

The research procedures also seemed unfinished. The last section

failed to present the process as to how the data is analy,ed the results

of the analysis were not presented. The overall methodology+ however+

was fairly comprehensive and extensive. The data presented were

detailed and supported the overall ob(ective of the methodology