AS Coursework Overall Marks

Name: George Eccles

Planning – Comments and mark out of 14/20

For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet

Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 38/60There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills Footage:Is appropriate for target audience, mostly fitting genre conventions of drama/thriller well. Controlled use of camera although some shots out of focus.Editing:Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end. Good attempt at a variety of shots.Sound:Good use of diegetic and non-diegetic sound, although a better balance of sound track and dialogue needed in parts.Overall:A proficient thriller piece, however more attention to mise en scene needed

Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 14/20Question 1: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate offers some good analysis on his choices for his film opening. Some good use of examples.Question 2: Answered using Microsoft visio and slideshare. A good flow diagram showing how stereotypes have been used to represent social groups. Font is extremely small and could be bigger.Question 3: Answered using prezi. Candidate explains well that Vertigo Films or Lionsgate would be best to distribute his film using some good examples.Question 4 and 5: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Question 4 - Avatars used to represent the stereotypical audience members. Good inclusion of their likes and dislikes. Question 5 - A short survey was conducted however it is unclear how and to how many people. Some reflection on the results however this would have benefited from deeper analysis.Question 6: Answered using word and slideshare. A good collage created of the technologies used. Technologies have been talked through well.Question 7: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate provides a reflective piece explaining what he has learnt throughout his journey from preliminary to final task.

Overall a proficient evaluation, most answers offer good attention to detail, however some could have more. Reliance mainly word, power-point and slideshare to answer questions.

Total 66/100 Grade: C