AS Coursework Overall Marks

Name: Yasmin Rice

Planning – Comments and mark out of 17/20

For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet

Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 47/60There is evidence of proficient in the creative use of many of the technical skills.Footage:Is appropriate for target audience, fitting genre conventions of thriller well. Controlled use of camera throughout. A well set atmosphere. Good use of mise en scene.Editing:Edited well to build tension. Good variety of shots used throughout.Sound:Good use of diegetic and non-diegetic sound mixed well.Overall:A proficient thriller piece. Good use of locations and actors.

Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20Question 1: Answered using a word and slideshare. Candidate explains well how she conforms to the thriller genre conventions using stills from her film opening. Excellent detail however would have benefited from comparing certain aspects to more real media products.Question 2: Answered using prezi. Candidate explains very well who the target audience is and how they are represented in her film opening. Good analysis of costume, script and locations used.Question 3: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Candidate explains well that Paramount would be best to distribute her film using good clear examples.Question 4 and 5: Answered using prezi and blogger. Question 4 answered well using avatars to show stereotypical audience members likes and dislikes. Question 5 answered using a survey of a good range of people, results anre analysed excellently in the blog post.Question 6: Answered using powtoon. Excellent detail on all the technologies used throughout the process, broken down well into the stages they were used.Question 7: Answered using a word video and youtube. Candidate provides a very detailed reflective piece explaining what she has learnt throughout her journey, excellent detail, well done.

Overall an excellent evaluation, some great attention to detail and uses a good range of technologies, well done.

Total 80/100 Grade: A