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• Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
• What are the benefits and drawbacks?
• Discuss both views
BY NGOC BACH
DẠNG DISCUSSION
Hướng giải: Phân thân bài thành 2 khổ
+ Dạng 1: body 1: advantages. body 2: disadvantages
+ Dạng 2: body 1: view 1. body 2: view 2
Argument (Opinion) or Discussion?
BY NGOC BACH
Argument (Opinion) : When you argue, you are trying
to persuade the other person to agree with your point of
view.
Discuss: you consider different points of view
Dạng “Discuss both views “- Thảo luận 2 quan điểm
• Introduction
+ Nói về topic (paraphrase lại câu của đề bài)
+ Giới thiệu rằng view 1 đúng, view 2 cũng có ý đúng
• Thân bài 1: nêu nguyên nhân giải thích tại sao view 1 đúng
• Thân bài 2: nêu nguyên nhân giải thích tại sao view 2 đúng
• Conclusion
Nhắc lại ý nêu ra ở câu 2 mở bài
Lưu ý:
Tuyệt đối không nêu quan điểm bản thân ở bất cứ phần nào trong bài vì đề
bài không yêu cầu
BY NGOC BACH
DÀN BÀI CHUNG
Dạng “Discuss the advantages and disadvantages” – Thảo luận ưu
nhược điểm
• Introduction
+ Nói về topic (paraphrase lại câu của đề bài)
+ Giới thiệu rằng vấn đề có cả advantages và disadvantages
• Thân bài 1: nêu idea hỗ trợ ý advantages
• Thân bài 2: nêu idea hỗ trợ ý disadvantages
• Conclusion
Nhắc lại ý nêu ra ở câu 2 mở bài
Lưu ý:
Tuyệt đối không nêu quan điểm bản thân ở bất cứ phần nào trong bài vì đềbài không yêu cầu
BY NGOC BACH
DÀN BÀI CHUNG
BY NGOC BACH
VÍ DỤ
Some people believe that studying at university or college
is the best route to a successful career, while others
believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views.
TOPIC
QUESTION
DÀN BÀI CHUNG
+ MỞ BÀI
+ THÂN BÀI 1
+ THÂN BÀI 2
+ KẾT LUẬN
BY NGOC BACH
Mở bài:
Câu 1: Giới thiệu chủ đề “sau khi tốt nghiệp học sinh gặp phải vấn đề là nên tiếp
tục học hay đi làm luôn” .
Câu 2: Cả 2 quan điểm đều có ý đúng (không theo quan điểm nào cả)
Thân bài 1: Nêu những lợi ích của việc đi làm luôn
+ start earning money,
+ become independent, gain experience, learn skills,
+ get promotions, settle down earlier, afford a house, have a family
Thân bài 2: Nêu những lợi ích của việc tiếp tục đi học
+ some jobs require academic qualifications
+ better job opportunities, higher salaries, the job market is very competitive
Kết luận: nhắc lại ý nêu ra ở câu thứ 2 phần mở bài (chú ý paraphrase lại )
DÀN BÀI
CÂU CHỦ ĐỀ CỦA ĐỀ BÀI:
Some people believe that studying at university or college
is the best route to a successful career, while others
believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
CÂU VIẾT LẠI:
Upon graduating from high school, the young often wonder
whether they ought to keep on studying further or not
MỞ BÀI
CÂU THỨ 2 PHẦN MỞ BÀI :
Many people believe that continuing to study at a university or
college will be the best way to guarantee a successful career,
whereas others believe that working right after school is a better
option.
PHẦN CÂU HỎI CỦA ĐỀ BÀI:
Discuss both views
MỞ BÀI
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route
to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school. Discuss both views
Upon graduating from high school, the young often wonder whether they
ought to keep on studying further or not. Many people believe that
continuing to study at a university or college will be the best way
to guarantee a successful career, whereas others believe that working right
after school is a better option
MỞ BÀI
BY NGOC BACH
Working straight after graduation is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, by
working, young people will be able to earn money as soon as possible,
and since they will likely be mature enough, they will be able to live
independently on their own income. It is also common knowledge that
having a job leads to even more maturity. Secondly, a person who
chooses to get a job instead of pursuing higher education is likely to
progress rapidly in their career. This may help them to obtain a lot of
real experience and skills in their chosen profession.
Thân bài 1: Nêu những lợi ích của việc đi làm luôn
+ start earning money,
+ become independent, gain experience, learn skills,
+ get promotions, settle down earlier, afford a house, have a family
BY NGOC BACH
On the other hand, there are a variety reasons why people tend to
choose to continue their education after high school. First, a college
education prepares young people to meet higher-level qualifications,
which is what most employers expect these days. University
graduates usually get a much higher salary than those without a
university education. Furthermore, the job market is becoming more
and more competitive and nowadays people are well-advised to get a
degree, as hundreds of applicants often chase the top jobs. Having a
degree is an obvious advantage that university graduates have. In
Vietnam, students who graduate with an engineering degree are
highly paid and have an easy time getting a good job.
Thân bài 2: Nêu những lợi ích của việc tiếp tục đi học
+ some jobs require academic qualifications,
+ better job opportunities, higher salaries, the job market is very competitive
CÂU THỨ 2 PHẦN MỞ BÀI:
Many people believe that continuing to study at a university or college
will be the best way to guarantee a successful career, whereas others
believe that working right after school is a better option
KẾT LUẬN:
In conclusion, it seems evident that both working right after school
and choosing to continue higher-level studies each have their own
unique advantages.
Upon graduating from high school, the young often wonder whether they ought to keep on studying further or
not. Many people believe that continuing to study at a university or college will be the best way to guarantee a
successful career, whereas others believe that working right after school is a better option.
Working straight after graduation is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, by working, young people will be able to
earn money as soon as possible, and since they will likely be mature enough, they will be able to live
independently on their own income. It is also common knowledge that having a job leads to even more
maturity. Secondly, a person who chooses to get a job instead of pursuing higher education is likely to
progress rapidly in their career. This may help them to obtain a lot of real experience and skills in their chosen
profession.
On the other hand, there are a variety reasons why people tend to choose to continue their education after high
school. First, a college education prepares young people to meet higher-level qualifications, which is what
most employers expect these days. University graduates usually get a much higher salary than those without a
university education. Furthermore, the job market is becoming more and more competitive and nowadays
people are well-advised to get a degree, as hundreds of applicants often chase the top jobs. Having a degree is
an obvious advantage that university graduates have. In Vietnam, students who graduate with an engineering
degree are highly paid and have an easy time getting a good job.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both working right after school and choosing to continue higher-level
studies each have their own unique advantages.
286 words
Written by Ngoc Bach
BY NGOC BACH
+ Task response:
You wrote 286 words, which is enough! Aim for 260-290 to be safe. Less than 250 will
lose lots of marks. Your first paragraph paraphrases the whole question . Your points
are all relevant and well supported with examples and explanations
+ Coherence and cohesion:
There is a clear overall progression in the writing and ideas are arranged coherently.
Paragraphs and sentences are very well constructed. Good topic sentences.You use a
range of linkers throughout the essay.
+ Lexical resource:
The range of vocabulary is very good and there is flexibility in use. “Good vocabulary”
guarantee a successful career , to live independently , pursuing higher education , to
obtain a lot of real experience , progress rapidly , to meet higher-level qualifications
+ Grammatical range and accuracy:
You use a range of structures accurately and there is a good range of structures. No
errors detected.
IELTS EXAMINER COMMENTS
Template
Mở bài:
+ Paraphrase câu topic của đề bài
+ While there are benefits to …., there are also good reasons why it might be
beneficial to / Many people suppose that …., whereas others believe (that)…
Thân bài
+ On the one hand,…….is attractive for several reasons / ……is beneficial in
some ways
+ On the other hand, , there are a variety of reasons why ….
Kết luận:
In conclusion, it seems evident that ....(both views)....have their own unique
advantages.
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