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Year 4 writing moderations Feb –March 2017
Examples of work ‘at’ age related expectation.
Evidence of level: reads for errors, making amendments where necessary, speech marks, commas, varied sentence openers.
Evidence of level: Fronted adverbials, use of paragraph to separate ideas; some adventurous vocabulary
Next steps: use of standard English; variety of punctuation.
Example of writing just below age related expectation
Evidence: uses noun phrases and inverted commas; occasional use of fronted adverbials
Next steps: length of writing and paragraphing; to secure fronted adverbials; capital letters.
Example of writing above age related expectations
Evidence of level: well organised paragraphs; good conjunctions and adverbials to open sentences and paragraphs.
Next steps: tenses, more adverbs and broaden vocabulary.
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