Task:

Language Content Style Proof read: Spelling/Grammar

/Punctuation

Headlines

* What

examples of language stand out? Use the checklist above to help.

*What is the story about? Is the purpose to inform/entertain?

*Is the

article chatty or formal? Serious or funny? How long are the sentences?

*Proof read, using

spellchecker, but ensure that you judge the overall clarity Consider sentence structure and paragraphing: does the article make sense? Is it fluid and clear? Use Ctrl/Alt M to suggest changes

* What kind of headline

is it? What techniques are used? (Pun/Alliteration/Informal language etc)

There isn’t much to talk about and nothing to notice that is to stand out which would be best to change the article to have more of this.

The purpose is a review on a film and it is informative because I read this making me want to go watch the franchise of films for myself and see if they are any good.

The article is like he is personally directing at me which would be a good thing because I’d want to read more and it seems to be serious as though this person loves these films.

I checked it and there weren’t any mistakes which Indicates that it was a well checked before finished which is always a good thing to check work before you show it, the only thing would be sorting out the layout the text changes when you read the next two paragraphs.

There is no fitting title for it, due to it being a few and it seems just to be the raid 2 review which seems as though it didn’t have much thought into which means could have done better maybe thinking of a qoute of the movie and adapting it as a title.