I have taken the ideas and feedback from my draft designs to make my products more suitable for my market audience. I feel that I now have more appropriate and better thought-out designs for my market products. I asked my client for feedback on these new designs.

Sticker Designs

“I think the stickers look really great, the added snake pattern on the characterʼs shirt helps unify the stickers together. The logo sticker looks fine as it is, but maybe try to add the dark red found on the other stickers somewhere to link them altogether even more? This may not work however but I would give it a try. Also, maybe add the logo to the characterʼs shirt to make it clear he is apart of the Snake Escape game?” - Dave

From this feedback, I have learned that my revisions to the designs has been successful in linking all of the stickers together. However, more possible changes have been given, such as adding the dark red to the logo sticker and adding the logo onto Jimmyʼs shirt. When I revised my designs, I tried including the red to the logo sticker, but nothing seemed to work well, and so I decided to leave it out. I understand the comments my client made, but as I have tried and failed to implement it already, I feel that I will have to ignore this possible change. For the logo on the shirt idea however, I think that I could implement the logo or possibly the “S” from the logo onto Jimmyʼs shirt to further link the stickers all together.

Poster Design

“I definitely like this design more than the last one. The poster seems a lot less cluttered in the bottom right corner of the poster and the use of the QR code and the screenshots like I suggested work really well. I think it looks a lot better laid-out and I like the fact you have made the character and plant more darker.” - Mel

From this feedback, it is clear that my revisions on the draft design were successful and that no more revisions will be needed. The client was very happy with the final design and so the poster should be fit for purpose.

Revised Designs Client Feedback

T-Shirt Design

“The added colour makes the t-shirt stand out a lot more, I think it really looks nice. I think you should stick to the colours you have chosen as they are the same colours you used on your app icon, which helps links all of your designs together and makes it easy for people to identify that it is in fact a Snake Escape shirt. I think the overall logo design is really great, I think it is clever how you made a snakeʼs head out of a flame.” - Jacob

From this feedback, it seems that my revision on the t-shirt design has been beneficial in making a better t-shirt for the game. The t-shirt stands out a fair bit as the colours used are bright, compared to the black t-shirt it would be printed on. Overall, this t-shirt would be fit for purpose and so no other revisions to the design are required.

Revised Designs Client Feedback