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Kelli Jacobs HWP Summer 2009Kelli Jacobs HWP Summer 2009

Adapted from and all examples taken from:

Schaffer, Jane. “Peer Response That Works.” Journal of Teaching Writing 15:1 (1996) 81-90.

Our Goal: Our Goal: We want to We want to describe describe what what we see in our partner’s we see in our partner’s writing to help them writing to help them understand what needs understand what needs clarifying, elaborating, clarifying, elaborating, and omitting.and omitting.

Prompt: "Discuss how a character changes in the course of a work you Prompt: "Discuss how a character changes in the course of a work you have studied this year."have studied this year."

Juliet is only 14, but by meeting Romeo, she virtually becomes an adult. Juliet is only 14, but by meeting Romeo, she virtually becomes an adult. Her attitude changes dramatically as does her outward appearance.Her attitude changes dramatically as does her outward appearance.

Through the start of Shakespeare's play "Romeo and Juliet" Juliet is Through the start of Shakespeare's play "Romeo and Juliet" Juliet is constantly being pressured by others to get married and find the right constantly being pressured by others to get married and find the right person for herself. She doesn't know what to do about the unwanted person for herself. She doesn't know what to do about the unwanted pressure because she hasn't really found the right man and she doesn't pressure because she hasn't really found the right man and she doesn't want to be forced into anything.want to be forced into anything.

When she meets Romeo, her attitude shifts toward him. She can never When she meets Romeo, her attitude shifts toward him. She can never stop thinking of him. This change brought about happiness, because her stop thinking of him. This change brought about happiness, because her search for him had ended, yet it also brought about misfortune, because search for him had ended, yet it also brought about misfortune, because it was apparent that there would be trouble with them being in different it was apparent that there would be trouble with them being in different families. Juliet eventually becomes so obsessed with his presence, that families. Juliet eventually becomes so obsessed with his presence, that she is willing to do anything to stay with him, even kill herself. This was she is willing to do anything to stay with him, even kill herself. This was the very sad part of her change. She was unable to control it, and her the very sad part of her change. She was unable to control it, and her love for Romeo backfired.love for Romeo backfired.

Juliet's change was an important one. It gave "Romeo and Juliet," Juliet's change was an important one. It gave "Romeo and Juliet," happiness, theme, and tragedy.happiness, theme, and tragedy.

Now we are going to model the kinds of Now we are going to model the kinds of questions we want about anything that is: questions we want about anything that is: puzzling, unclear, confusing, or illogical. puzzling, unclear, confusing, or illogical.

Please write our sample questions down with me so Please write our sample questions down with me so you have an example when you write your own you have an example when you write your own peer responses in a few minutes.peer responses in a few minutes.

To earn an A on this assignment, they must write at least ten valid and To earn an A on this assignment, they must write at least ten valid and helpful questions about you partner's paper. The samples we write helpful questions about you partner's paper. The samples we write together might include more than the required ten; I encourage you to together might include more than the required ten; I encourage you to address all the issues that occur to you as you read.address all the issues that occur to you as you read.

We specifically avoid "yes/no" questions. Why? We specifically avoid "yes/no" questions. Why?

Only use questions. No statements. Only use questions. No statements.

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1. Who are Juliet and Romeo?1. Who are Juliet and Romeo?2. Where do they live?2. Where do they live?3. Why and how does she become an 3. Why and how does she become an adult by meeting Romeo?adult by meeting Romeo?4. What was her attitude before? after?4. What was her attitude before? after?5. What was her outward appearance 5. What was her outward appearance before? after?before? after?

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1. Who is pressuring Juliet to get 1. Who is pressuring Juliet to get married?married?2. Why is she being forced to marry?2. Why is she being forced to marry?3. Why is she getting married so young?3. Why is she getting married so young?

Paragraph 3Paragraph 31. How does her attitude shift?1. How does her attitude shift?2. What examples from the story show she can't stop 2. What examples from the story show she can't stop thinking of him?thinking of him?3. What is the change that brought about happiness?3. What is the change that brought about happiness?4. What misfortune happened?4. What misfortune happened?5. Why would there be trouble because they were in 5. Why would there be trouble because they were in different families?different families?6. Did they get married or not?6. Did they get married or not?7. What wasn't she able to control?7. What wasn't she able to control?

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1. Why was the change an important one?1. Why was the change an important one?2. What themes did it give "Romeo and 2. What themes did it give "Romeo and Juliet"?Juliet"?3. What tragedy took place?3. What tragedy took place?4. How did the change give people 4. How did the change give people happiness?happiness?

Your Prompt:Your Prompt:

““The test of literature is, I suppose, whether The test of literature is, I suppose, whether we ourselves live more intensely for the we ourselves live more intensely for the reading of it.” – Elizabeth Drewreading of it.” – Elizabeth Drew

Write about two works of literature that Write about two works of literature that have helped you to live more intensely. have helped you to live more intensely.

You will respond to two different papers today on two You will respond to two different papers today on two separate note cards.separate note cards.

At the top of each note card, write:At the top of each note card, write:

"My name is_____, and my partner's name is "My name is_____, and my partner's name is _____" to eliminate confusion later when papers are _____" to eliminate confusion later when papers are being passed back.being passed back.

Number the paragraphs on your partner’s paper for Number the paragraphs on your partner’s paper for easy reference. This will be the ONLY thing you easy reference. This will be the ONLY thing you write on their paper. write on their paper.

Write down questions about your partner’s paper Write down questions about your partner’s paper paragraph-by-paragraph. paragraph-by-paragraph.

Remember: questions ONLY, no statements. (no Remember: questions ONLY, no statements. (no yes/no questions) yes/no questions)