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This is the image which I used for people to answer questions about. By doing this, I received some feedback about the text on the page. I found out that: The font for the masthead would not be suitable for the genre which I am trying to represent. I can change the font of the masthead to have a more shattered or a rougher font rather than one with pieces coming out of it, I should use one which is broken or cracked. The cover lines are not very easily read and this would be improved by using a block of colour rather than having them shaded in different ways. Spacing out the cover lines more and using block colours would make it easier to read as in some places it is very difficult

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Page 1: Analysis of Hot Desking

This is the image which I used for people to answer questions about. By doing this, I received some feedback about the text on the page.

I found out that:

The font for the masthead would not be suitable for the genre which I am trying to represent.

I can change the font of the masthead to have a more shattered or a rougher font rather than one with pieces coming out of it, I should use one which is broken or cracked.

The cover lines are not very easily read and this would be improved by using a block of colour rather than having them shaded in different ways.

Spacing out the cover lines more and using block colours would make it easier to read as in some places it is very difficult to see as it can fade too much. Adding a drop shadow may also help this.

Page 2: Analysis of Hot Desking

This is the image which peers saw when they were writing their answers to the questions is asked. From their answers, I found that:

The font would need to be changed because it doesn’t seem to have punk/rock connotations Something sans-serif was recommended to be used so I can see how that would look instead

to make it easier to read.

The black stands out and makes it clear to read I can keep this theme with the black and red and it would stand out and contrast.

I would need to make it clearer that the first column is for a different set of questions. Maybe making the box around it less faded would make it stand out more.

The font for the pull quote may look better in a different font but is bold enough to read. People had mixed reactions to the font of the pull-quote but I can experiment with different

fonts and see which works best.